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Soldier's Time

October 22, 2009
By Silverwolf14 SILVER, Cochranville, Pennsylvania
Silverwolf14 SILVER, Cochranville, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
'Those who are dead, are not dead, they're just living in my head.'


A frozen moment, waiting for the war to begin,
His eyes closed, his ears searching for sound,
Imagining what is to come,
His daydream suddenly stops, his eyes flash open
Each breath hangs in the air like a cloud
The arena is rocking with sound but he can’t hear it,
He can only hear his heart.
Then, it is his time to glide across a frozen battlefield.
The whistle blows.
He wakes up.


The author's comments:
I was thinking of a quiet place.

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_NoAir_ BRONZE said...
on Apr. 16 2010 at 2:53 pm
_NoAir_ BRONZE, Toronto, Other
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Favorite Quote:
There are as many ways to live as there are people in this world. Each one deserves a closer look.


–Golly (Harriet The Spy)

Wow! I love the ending the most. So strange, and it leaves you amazed and confused at the same time. Nice job on this!

dule05 BRONZE said...
on Nov. 25 2009 at 1:16 pm
dule05 BRONZE, Kraljevo, Other
1 article 1 photo 102 comments

Favorite Quote:
"In the end, the only people who fail are those who do not try." ~David Viscott

Elizabeth, thank you for your comment, I'm glad you like it :) I also read your poem and I think it's really great, it involves so many themes and I was in thoughts after I read it xD

on Nov. 2 2009 at 1:18 pm
Usslincoln SILVER, Ovid, Michigan
5 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
Live as if you were to die tomorrow. Learn as if you were to live forever.” ~ Mahatma Gandhi

WOW! it feels like the reader is in the shoes of a soldier, amazing! two thumbs up!!

choirchic said...
on Oct. 28 2009 at 2:54 pm
that was really good. i liked it