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Quiet

October 22, 2009
By HurtTiger SILVER, Jacksonville, Florida
HurtTiger SILVER, Jacksonville, Florida
9 articles 2 photos 26 comments

Favorite Quote:
Sometimes you gotta be cruel to be kind.<br /> No risk, no reward


im tired of your memories
lets stay here in reality
you keep speeking words to me
really, im not listening
i burn alive from every word
deep fried, so crispy, like the bird
that cannot ever fly away
i dont want to be forced to stay
hating every word you say
getting hotter every day
not going to hurt you- im provoking
will i save you?- leave you choking
silly feet anger wells doing a dance
and it will not give you a chance
the horror, humor, and romance
is as tired as the dog that profusely pants
i need you to hush before my anger is topped
if i get my hands on you
forever you'll stop.






-YK



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arnezyall said...
on Apr. 1 2010 at 12:38 pm
dawg dis was too hott. Funni too. I kno it aint meant to be but i c humor n lmost anythang. but dis was fyye. imma go c sum mo. deuces.

on Apr. 1 2010 at 12:35 pm
sounds pretty personal this article. But it is really good. I love it! Im going to read moreof your articles now...

Oliviaw BRONZE said...
on Dec. 28 2009 at 6:56 pm
Oliviaw BRONZE, West Cola, South Carolina
4 articles 0 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;Screwed down for life.&quot; ---Iowa Bob, The Hotel New Hampshire

haha, ok, good that I know now...

on Dec. 27 2009 at 5:13 pm
HurtTiger SILVER, Jacksonville, Florida
9 articles 2 photos 26 comments

Favorite Quote:
Sometimes you gotta be cruel to be kind.<br /> No risk, no reward

lol... no one broke my heart in these. i guess if im angry i cant really control what i write and how i write it. on the outside nobody knows how i feel inside or about teenink. I didn't mean for the poems to sound the same, just to rhyme. lol. do not be concerned.

Oliviaw BRONZE said...
on Dec. 25 2009 at 9:38 pm
Oliviaw BRONZE, West Cola, South Carolina
4 articles 0 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;Screwed down for life.&quot; ---Iowa Bob, The Hotel New Hampshire

What happened? Did someone break your heart? Both your poems involve the same idea...lets talk.