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November 10, 2009
By cutelilpoet01 GOLD, Jackson, Michigan
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" I may be selfish, impatient, a little insecure and at times hard to handle, but if you can't handle me at my worst, you sure don't deserve me at my best." Marilyn Monroe

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You left for so long and now that your back i want more, i expect more as a result of your abandonment.But do i feel the same?
Life with you years ago was a fairytale. You were my knight in shining armor. I looked up to you so much, but now as i look at you today those feelings are nowhere to be found.
Before you left me my love was strong, but now i feel forever ruined. My soul forever condemned to loneliness.
Why did you have to take my breath away? Why did you have to bring so much sunshine into my life that now is forever hidden behind grey clouds and tears.

© Monica L., St. George, UT

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I wrote this about my ex/current boyfriend and the emotion that i'm feeling because of him.
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