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December 9, 2009
By jimmy_a GOLD, Sanford, North Carolina
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jimmy_a GOLD, Sanford, North Carolina
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Look for me, not with a flashlight but open your heart n free your soul n there my love i shall be

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From across the street i saw you
walking with the grace of an angel
shinning in a world of darkness
from my empty shell i saw you
I ran to catch you and you saw me
our eyes slowly met
and sweat dripped strangly down my neck.
you similed shyly at me
as i struggled to breath
for i knew this moment was heaven
we moved quickly toward each other
and inside our embrace we found a safe haven.
within your kiss i tasted love
what a sweet taste passed from out lips.
i looked weirdly into your eyes
for i knew that love had finally saw me.

© Hailey J., Lake Oswego, OR

The author's comments:
Um well what inspired to write this poem was a dream. N i woke up the next morning and this poem was born.
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Rosalie PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 5 2010 at 5:55 am
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this is beautiful!

cute dream:)