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Does He Know

December 4, 2009
By SilverDawn GOLD, Burnaby, Other
SilverDawn GOLD, Burnaby, Other
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Does he know how he still hurts me
About the wounds that'll never heal
Can he hear my broken sobs
A mournful whisper in the night

Does he feel this terrible pain
Radiating from my torn heart
Can he count all the tears I've shed
An amount too great to name

Does he hear my silent lips
Quietly repeating his name
Can he taste my cold sorrow
Bitter regret and sour loss

Does he see my unbearable ache
My heart's clawing at itself
Can he tell how I want to forget
Though I know I love him still

Does he notice how I wish to hold him
To go back to how we were before
Can he remember the memories I replay
When we promised to stay together.

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This article has 4 comments.

on Mar. 23 2011 at 10:04 am
Hollywoodundead255 SILVER, Mchenry, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
its just another chapter in life but don't close the book...... turn the page.

i can realate to this too it hurts so much when you think about that one special person....... =(

on May. 16 2010 at 5:23 pm
sydney_hope GOLD, Round Rock, Texas
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This is beautiful :) "my heart's clawing at itself"... I loved that line. I can relate.

on May. 1 2010 at 10:01 am
hello.beautiful PLATINUM, New York, New York
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Favorite Quote:
Look at the nations and watch— and be utterly amazed. For I am going to do something in your days that you would not believe, even if you were told. -Habakkuk 1:5

Simply stated, this poem is amazing. This describes exactly how I feel. You are a very talented writer, keep writing.

Favorite Line- Can he tell how I want to forget, Though I know I love him still

I always really like the entire last stanza. Especially the last two lines.

Amazing poem.  

on Jan. 20 2010 at 4:41 pm
FashionGuru DIAMOND, Manhattan, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"I don't do fashion, I am fashion." -Coco Chanel

Wow!!! I adore this piece. I can see how much pain there is in your voice. I've read ir work and it's all great!!