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sense is a relative term

December 6, 2009
By blingblang4eva ELITE, Fayetteville, Georgia
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you say you love me
but then don’t know if you wanna be with me
it makes no sense
having your feelings sit on the fence
teel me one thing
then another
I can’t deal with your ambivalence
it’s such a bother
you need to decide
if you wanna be with me
cause eventually I’m just gunna walk away

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blingblang4eva ELITE said...
on Jan. 1 2010 at 7:42 pm
blingblang4eva ELITE, Fayetteville, Georgia
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thnxs :) glad you like it
JohnDeereGirl DIAMOND said...
on Jan. 1 2010 at 7:40 pm
JohnDeereGirl DIAMOND, Westerlo, New York
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;I&#039;d rather be hated for who I am, than loved for who I&#039;m not&quot; <br /> &quot;Somewhere betweeen us talking, you saying I deserve better, and you making me laugh when I wanted to cry, I fell in love with you.&quot;

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I love this poem! It fits what I am going through right now. Keep writing!