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What a Mess

December 17, 2009
By kiwi12 PLATINUM, Austin, Texas
kiwi12 PLATINUM, Austin, Texas
28 articles 10 photos 365 comments

What a mess
Life can be
Is God really test
Ing me?

It may not be right
To hide behind a mask
But to stand to full height
Can be a difficult task

If 99% of people
Are so predictable
Why don’t we see the pole
We are about to run into?

We hear of the good-hearted
We know they do good things
They should be the role models and wanted
People we follow and of what we sings

But all the songs I hear now
What the youth today like
Are things they should not even know how
Is that not a good enough fight?

This stupid in-between stage
Leaves me questioning and confused
Sad, sometimes full of rage
Is it really worth it when it sparks a fuse?

Who knows?
I don’t
There are a bunch of shows
Should I throw stones?

This is unforgettable
Something I can’t get out of my head
This sucks and is so hate-able

Even after all the anger I let out
It’s still hungry and must be fed
I still got plenty to write about
Oh how you must dread!

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This article has 3 comments.

on Aug. 29 2010 at 8:43 pm
kiwi12 PLATINUM, Austin, Texas
28 articles 10 photos 365 comments
thank ya! I apperciate it.

Whylime said...
on Aug. 29 2010 at 4:24 pm
Whylime, Brentwood, Tennessee
0 articles 0 photos 157 comments

Favorite Quote:
Grief is the price we pay for love -- Queen Elizabeth ll
Don't go there, I'll only follow -- ???
Why is a raven like a writing desk? -- The Mad Hatter from Alice in Wonderland
Chewing gum is really gross, chewing gum I hate the most -- Willy W.

I felt your frustration, it is somehow whimsical-- it was nice (:

on Aug. 22 2010 at 9:29 pm
Marlyre PLATINUM, Kalamazoo, Michigan
21 articles 0 photos 208 comments

Favorite Quote:
"when you cry, do you waste your tears?" Madonna

when it comes to rhyme, this is great... it doesnt get in the way.. kudos to you!