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You and Me

January 11, 2010
By pampalooga PLATINUM, Natick, Massachusetts
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"We all can't be heroes. Somebody has to sit on the sides and clap as they go by." "In the end, they're just more words."

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It could stretch on forever,
this moment,
like the horizon line
just before sunset.
It could weigh tons,
this moment,
with new, strange emotions,
young and naive.
It could be so sweet,
this moment,
like a teaspoon of honey,
all gooey and good.
It could have promise,
this moment.
If only it were real
and not a fantasy
caressed by my mind.
This moment
of you and me.

© Gary C., Pequannock, NJ

The author's comments:
I wrote this because so many times I've imagined something totally awesome happening to me in a dream or just out of the blue, something that would never happen no matter how hard I imagined.
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pampalooga PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 16 2010 at 7:52 am
pampalooga PLATINUM, Natick, Massachusetts
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&quot;We all can&#039;t be heroes. Somebody has to sit on the sides and clap as they go by.&quot; &quot;In the end, they&#039;re just more words.&quot;

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i liked that part too. thanks
alayapoetgirl BRONZE said...
on Feb. 15 2010 at 9:20 pm
alayapoetgirl BRONZE, St. Louis, Missouri
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Life is hard; but it&#039;s harder if you&#039;re stupid. -John Wayne

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I can definetely relate to this poem...and the part about the honey, is a great accent to this poem