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January 28, 2010
By FlamableFyre DIAMOND, Spartanburg, South Carolina
FlamableFyre DIAMOND, Spartanburg, South Carolina
93 articles 9 photos 107 comments

Favorite Quote:
I don&#039;t have ambitions or desires. <br /> Being a poet isn&#039;t my ambition, <br /> it&#039;s my way of being alone.<br /> ~ Fernando Pessoa ~


You made me believe in love.
You were the one
Who answered my prayers.
We didn’t meet on a beach
Or kiss under the sunset,
We met at school.
School wasn’t ever romantic or
Fair or even loved by anyone,
So how did we meet in such a
Disastrous place and turn it into
Somewhere that made our
Lives just a little more
Bearable?
It must have been you.
I've never had that effect on
Others, but you have this
Aura about you.
It makes people believe there’s
More to you than
That though exterior.
It makes me believe that your
Hiding a secret from the rest
Of the world, one that you
Will tell me when the
Time calls for it,
But for now, I just see that
Cocky smile of yours and
That’s all I need…
You.



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on Apr. 12 2010 at 2:31 pm
adristar96 SILVER, Miami, Florida
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Life is like a box of chocolate, You&#039;ll never know what your gonna get. :) Forest Gump

this one is awesome! i liked it alot :)

on Apr. 10 2010 at 6:08 pm
FlamableFyre DIAMOND, Spartanburg, South Carolina
93 articles 9 photos 107 comments

Favorite Quote:
I don&#039;t have ambitions or desires. <br /> Being a poet isn&#039;t my ambition, <br /> it&#039;s my way of being alone.<br /> ~ Fernando Pessoa ~

cool, my boyfriend and i have been off and on for like a year. he's always there for me. and thanks so much

on Apr. 10 2010 at 4:22 pm
Kristy_loves_Keats PLATINUM, Arvada, Colorado
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c no prob i just love it its my #1 fave! you inspire me! lol =)

on Feb. 16 2010 at 6:12 pm
FlamableFyre DIAMOND, Spartanburg, South Carolina
93 articles 9 photos 107 comments

Favorite Quote:
I don&#039;t have ambitions or desires. <br /> Being a poet isn&#039;t my ambition, <br /> it&#039;s my way of being alone.<br /> ~ Fernando Pessoa ~

lol thanks so much for commenting and liking, and ill give you an air hug back!!! thanks again!

on Feb. 15 2010 at 9:25 pm
Kristy_loves_Keats PLATINUM, Arvada, Colorado
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i love this poem it makes me smile and makes me feel great but then there is this moment of sadness in it. it is amazing you deserve some sort of a reward hun haha i give you an air hug haha keep righting PLEASSS!!

<3 kkdlulu<3

on Feb. 15 2010 at 8:48 pm
hollyhottell DIAMOND, Redding, California
54 articles 0 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
poetry is a diary written out loud

i like your poetry. you should do more. i just joined this sight its really kool. i right poems bout my boyfreind to. i totally agree with your poem. its hard to imagine you could find someone you love among so many peopel at skool that try to make your life hell . i met my boyfriend at skool to. weve been together 6 months