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The One I Miss

March 22, 2010
By Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)


There are times I miss your voice
All the things you used to say
I wonder if you meant it
Before you walked away

I miss your arms around me
As I dozed in your embrace
I miss seeing the smile
That would light up your face

I miss your lips on mine
So much love in that first kiss
I cannot settle for another
For it is you I miss


The author's comments:
This is one of the many poems I wrote after my boyfriend broke up with me.

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Trolllollo said...
on Apr. 27 2010 at 9:49 am
Trolllollo, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
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i loved it i know a lot of people can relate

on Apr. 25 2010 at 12:44 pm
LostAngel DIAMOND, Jersey, New Jersey
65 articles 0 photos 89 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Just live your life, if people don't like the way you are doing it then they can get out of it" "if you can't stand me at my worst you dont deserve me at my best"

Oh my Lord, I love love love it

on Apr. 15 2010 at 6:01 pm
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)

thank you:)

on Apr. 15 2010 at 11:28 am
salamander254 BRONZE, Branford, Connecticut
3 articles 0 photos 16 comments

Favorite Quote:
"It is better to die on your feet than to live on your knees."
-Che Guevara

I liked it, very concise

on Apr. 14 2010 at 10:32 am
Supernova7 GOLD, Redford, Texas
16 articles 6 photos 394 comments

Favorite Quote:
Let me cry my tears let me live in sorrow as long as you promise to be with me tomorrow
By Me:)

Please comment any advice is welcome:)