All Nonfiction
- Bullying
- Books
- Academic
- Author Interviews
- Celebrity interviews
- College Articles
- College Essays
- Educator of the Year
- Heroes
- Interviews
- Memoir
- Personal Experience
- Sports
- Travel & Culture
All Opinions
- Bullying
- Current Events / Politics
- Discrimination
- Drugs / Alcohol / Smoking
- Entertainment / Celebrities
- Environment
- Love / Relationships
- Movies / Music / TV
- Pop Culture / Trends
- School / College
- Social Issues / Civics
- Spirituality / Religion
- Sports / Hobbies
All Hot Topics
- Bullying
- Community Service
- Environment
- Health
- Letters to the Editor
- Pride & Prejudice
- What Matters
- Back
Summer Guide
- Program Links
- Program Reviews
- Back
College Guide
- College Links
- College Reviews
- College Essays
- College Articles
- Back
I'll tell her
I’ll tell her that she’s beautiful
I’ll tell her she’s the only one
I’ll tell her that she’s so smart
More radiant than the sun
5
I’ll tell her that I love her
Because she loves to hear it
I’ll show her that I love her
But I don’t have to cuz she knows it
I’ll play her the music
10
That always fills my heart
“It reminds me of you” I sing
“And I knew it from the start”
I’ll tell her she’s the best
The spark of my fire
15
I’ll tell her that she fuels
The flame of my desire
I’ll tell her that I’ll write
To her endlessly
I’ll promise to always call
20
To fill her heart with glee
I’ll tell her to be happy
And that everything is going to be okay
I’ll comfort her when she’s sad
And make all the bad things go away
25
I’ll tell her that I need her
That it’ll never be the same
I’ll tell her that I love her too
And that I’m always the one to blame
I’ll never tell her I hate her
30
And I’ll never do her wrong
I just want her approval
All I want is for us to be strong
I’ll tell her that she’s great
And that she’s a marvelous person
35
I’ll tell her she’s the best
Beyond means of deductive reason
I’ll tell her I’m so happy
To have her as a friend
But I am even happier
40
That I can love her in the end
Similar Articles
JOIN THE DISCUSSION
This article has 10 comments.
Thanks:)
and I don't mind about the critique, it's helpful, thanks.
yeah, that flows a lot better (the revised stanza that is). To be honest, I'm super annoying with my comments and I search for things to critique on. It's not that I'm trying to be mean, I just really want to help people make their work better. Cuz I like when people do that with mine.
I really like the meaning of this poem to.... obviously... ;)
haha
I read it for my poetry slam:) didn't win but everyone loved it haha
yeah i'm a guy and i'm single;) lol
yeahhh...
the new version is
I’ll tell her that I love her
Because it’s what she loves to hear
I’ll show her that I love her
And tell her that I always need her near