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Fallin'

April 30, 2010
By Avidreaderandwriter GOLD, Dutch Harbor, Alaska
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Avidreaderandwriter GOLD, Dutch Harbor, Alaska
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People are like quicksand, regular at first, tricky next, the end, you sink. -Annoymous

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I loved the fall, but the catching, was my personal favorite,
We couldn't hate, were not haters!
But, it seems to late.
Black, grey, white? Lets make a rainbow, a rainbow of delight.
Call, talk, chat
Where am I at?
A BILLION years it seems,
we went by not talking,
me glancing in your direction.
But, i was going in the wrong direction.
Perfection(:

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Poem written to someone i miss dearly.
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eony72294 said...
on Jun. 9 2010 at 10:51 pm
this is amazing...good job!
Avidreaderandwriter GOLD said...
on May. 28 2010 at 7:14 pm
Avidreaderandwriter GOLD, Dutch Harbor, Alaska
13 articles 0 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
People are like quicksand, regular at first, tricky next, the end, you sink. -Annoymous

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Thanks(: Will do.
fusrodahsaraaa GOLD said...
on May. 25 2010 at 9:25 pm
fusrodahsaraaa GOLD, Albany, Other
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This is really Good. Keep Posting! :)