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SuddenWeakness

May 25, 2010
By Rochel GOLD, Westminster, California
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Rochel GOLD, Westminster, California
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"Everyone is going to hurt you, Sooner or later you'll have to decide who's worth going through the pain".

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The moon was hidden behind all the clouds, The sudden depression came back but it was worse then before. I felt my heart trying to rip out of my cheast, I felt the moon trying to break through the clouds, But the clouds were to strong and my heart was to weak. As i walked further into the darkness and away from the light i began to feel a sudden peeace within.

© Dan B., Papillion, NE

The author's comments:
Iwrote this poem because in my point of view darkness isn't always a bad things. To me darkness is a place were i can collect my thoughts, were i can think about many things.Darkness can hold peace if you try hard to find.
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