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July 2, 2010
By blueeyes79 SILVER, Versailles, Kentucky
blueeyes79 SILVER, Versailles, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
"Rain is my Sunshine"

My life is falling fast,
Dropping before my eyes
should i try to hold on fast,
and watch my life collide?
collide with nothing.
Collide with what?
What could possibly collide?
My pride and failures?
My loves and hates?
Do I really love?
Do I really hate?
Love and hate are thrown around
like pebbles in the sand
yes, I love.
But do I really hate?
No. at least I don’t think so.
But still my life falls.
No parachute or lifeline now.
I’ve dug a hole 6 ft. deep
on my own, no one to blame.
I blame myself.
Only God can save me now.
Save me now.

The author's comments:
Just some thoughts of mine =)

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on Aug. 7 2010 at 1:23 am
DannyKid33 PLATINUM, Pleasant Hill, California
34 articles 2 photos 81 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't ever let the media tell you what to look like. You're beautiful the way you are. Stay beautiful, keep it ugly." - Gerard Way.

beautiful. absolutely beautiful!! i loved this poem so much, and truly, and it was amazing. I loved how it flowed continously and yet it all made sense. Your such an amazing writer keep it up!! :)