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July 24, 2010
By SoftballPoet PLATINUM, Branson, Missouri
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SoftballPoet PLATINUM, Branson, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"Love is like a rubber band. When one person lets go, it hurts the other person who is still holding on."

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I think I love you.
And surely you love me too.
So give our love a chance.
I know we can make it through.

I know that love can be cruel.
But it can also be rewarding.
And with me by your side.
I will make you feel important.

I am your future, and you are mine.
With our ex's in our past.
Try and believe that baby.
And i promise this will last.

If you want me and what i promised.
You must choose the correct route.
And putting first things first.
Are you going to ask me out?

The author's comments:
i wrote this a few years ago. i thought it was a little cheesey, but cute lol :P
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SoftballPoet PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 21 2010 at 8:51 pm
SoftballPoet PLATINUM, Branson, Missouri
26 articles 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Love is like a rubber band. When one person lets go, it hurts the other person who is still holding on."

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thank you!
=)=)=)=) said...
on Aug. 21 2010 at 11:08 am
this is awesome! it reminds me of this dude who sat next to me in geography the past year hahaha xD anyway, very relatable and awesome song/poem!!! keep on writing!!! =)