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December 1, 2010
By secrets_of_silence GOLD, Gisborne, Other
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life had i loved the more<br /> had it but passed away<br /> as quietly as the day<br /> ebbs from the darkening star.<br /> <br /> <br /> -emanuel litvinoff

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What happens when the bright path
You’ve been walking
Suddenly isn't there
All that’s left is the sunspots blinding you
Leaving you with no sight
Helpless

What happens when the thundering instructions
You’ve been receiving
Disappears
All that’s left is the roaring in your ears
Leaving you deaf
No sounds to interpret

What happens when the voice in your head
That you’ve been hearing
Vanishes
All that’s left is what you’ve done
Leaving you desolate
Nothing left

What happens when you find out its only you?
Your all alone
By yourself
All that’s left is your doubts
Your thoughts
Your fears

What happens then?
What happens when there's nothing left but you?
............

© Megan M., Ocala, FL

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im a christian and i was questioning the world still am in fact
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secrets_of_silence GOLD said...
on Aug. 14 2011 at 4:59 pm
secrets_of_silence GOLD, Gisborne, Other
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Favorite Quote:
life had i loved the more<br /> had it but passed away<br /> as quietly as the day<br /> ebbs from the darkening star.<br /> <br /> <br /> -emanuel litvinoff

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this is just polished... all my work gets rated in my head and this is one im maybe going to publish later on.
cheetoz45680 DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 11 2011 at 10:10 pm
cheetoz45680 DIAMOND, Bridgeport, Connecticut
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Pain is inevitable, suffering is optional.

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so i read your poems and decided this one's my favorite :) you're awesome
cheetoz45680 DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 11 2011 at 9:45 pm
cheetoz45680 DIAMOND, Bridgeport, Connecticut
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Pain is inevitable, suffering is optional.

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woah dude YOU'RE the one that's AMAZING. i reallly really like this one....it's awesome
secrets_of_silence GOLD said...
on Aug. 3 2011 at 4:20 pm
secrets_of_silence GOLD, Gisborne, Other
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Favorite Quote:
life had i loved the more<br /> had it but passed away<br /> as quietly as the day<br /> ebbs from the darkening star.<br /> <br /> <br /> -emanuel litvinoff

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thanks, i love to hear things like that. and the depressing edge was me being honest
Phoenixx GOLD said...
on Aug. 2 2011 at 8:53 pm
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I absoloutly love this! Theres a bit of a depressing edge to it, but it compliments the points that you trying to get across, ts like a perfect harmony, but a poem! :D
secrets_of_silence GOLD said...
on Jul. 7 2011 at 7:21 pm
secrets_of_silence GOLD, Gisborne, Other
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life had i loved the more<br /> had it but passed away<br /> as quietly as the day<br /> ebbs from the darkening star.<br /> <br /> <br /> -emanuel litvinoff

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well i wouldnt say im religous exactly but i find solace in god so.....

 

and thanks for the comments

MumblingMelanie DIAMOND said...
on Jul. 6 2011 at 11:59 pm
MumblingMelanie DIAMOND, Jackson, Missouri
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Brilliant.

I'm not religious, but I can appreciate how you feel.
I sincerely hope you find your own truth, whatever it may be.

And while I'm here, thank you very much for reading my poems & commenting. It means a lot. :)