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March 9, 2011
By PrettyGirlMia BRONZE, Kennesaw, Georgia
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PrettyGirlMia BRONZE, Kennesaw, Georgia
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A man falls in love through his eyes, a woman through her ears.

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I Started to change myself
forming an image
you wanted me
to be
As i looked
in the mirror
i found
a
person that wasn't
me
She had been
picked apart
put back together,
With your words
You beat me up
Still i choose
You
now i realize
It takes TWO
To make
YOU & ME
You will rule
ME
No Longer

© Gary C., Pequannock, NJ

The author's comments:
I Was Going Through a break up as you would call it , and i just took to my journal and stared to write.
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mommy7 said...
on Apr. 19 2011 at 4:51 pm
Awesome job honey! Mommy is SO proud of you!
tsphelps said...
on Apr. 13 2011 at 9:03 pm
I love this poem.  Great job by the author.