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July 8, 2011
By musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
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musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 733 comments

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&quot; Life is never easy for those who dream.&quot;<br /> There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

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What's your image of
me
just another stupid
teenager
loud
smart mouthed
cranky
guess what you
were there
to
at some point
and don't deny
how you
were

© Mark P., Woodside, NY

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just something about parents complaining about us when they were the same way we are
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musicispassion PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 20 2011 at 10:28 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 733 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot; Life is never easy for those who dream.&quot;<br /> There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

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so cliche haha
divingforreality GOLD said...
on Aug. 20 2011 at 1:46 am
divingforreality GOLD, Fontana, California
10 articles 7 photos 18 comments
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Relatable teenage material.
musicispassion PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 6 2011 at 2:24 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 733 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot; Life is never easy for those who dream.&quot;<br /> There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

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thankn u parents r parents :P
Ha-5-rika SILVER said...
on Aug. 6 2011 at 10:45 am
Ha-5-rika SILVER, Visakapatnam, Other
9 articles 7 photos 62 comments

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Life is what your thoughts make it.<br /> Happiness, success and the greatest of achievements are nothing if you don&#039;t have someone to share it with. <br /> A life lived for others is a life worthwhile - Albert Einstein.

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I do have this problem in my life. My parents are even against me, writing. Wonderfully writen.
musicispassion PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 26 2011 at 5:41 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 733 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot; Life is never easy for those who dream.&quot;<br /> There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

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thanks much appreciated :P
poetic.eyes PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 26 2011 at 1:11 pm
poetic.eyes PLATINUM, Everson, Washington
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eARTh

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I don't really have this problem but I understand because of others! Well written!!!
musicispassion PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 21 2011 at 10:33 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 733 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot; Life is never easy for those who dream.&quot;<br /> There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

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I think it's kinda annoying
firenrain GOLD said...
on Jul. 21 2011 at 9:10 pm
firenrain GOLD, Belle Mead, New Jersey
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&quot;A room without books is like a body without a soul.&quot;<br /> <br /> - Cicero<br /> <br /> Roman author, orator, &amp; politician (106 BC - 43 BC)

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i think the VIP things are new, they just symbolize the more active writers and commenters on Teenink. its kind of wierd cause almost everyone has it lol :)
musicispassion PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 21 2011 at 1:27 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 733 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot; Life is never easy for those who dream.&quot;<br /> There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

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i agree and thanks  sorry about the question mark can u tell me why all the screen names have VIP in green next to them?
firenrain GOLD said...
on Jul. 21 2011 at 9:41 am
firenrain GOLD, Belle Mead, New Jersey
10 articles 0 photos 37 comments

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&quot;A room without books is like a body without a soul.&quot;<br /> <br /> - Cicero<br /> <br /> Roman author, orator, &amp; politician (106 BC - 43 BC)

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i think like this alllll the time haha nice job with the rythm and emotion. however like people have said before there should have been a question mark on the second line :)
musicispassion PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 20 2011 at 11:08 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 733 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot; Life is never easy for those who dream.&quot;<br /> There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

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of course who r u?
Fuggin_Fuggers SILVER said...
on Jul. 20 2011 at 1:06 am
Fuggin_Fuggers SILVER, San Jacinto, California
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&quot;Sometimes it not about winning the race,its just being apart of it.&quot;<br /> &quot;Life&#039;s like an hour glass glued to a table.&quot;

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hey love it... you should check out my poems i published
musicispassion PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 18 2011 at 2:41 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 733 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot; Life is never easy for those who dream.&quot;<br /> There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

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ah i just looked at where i could of used them and ur correct thanks for the corrections :P
IAmWhoIWantToBe PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 18 2011 at 3:00 am
IAmWhoIWantToBe PLATINUM, Manila, Other
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&lrm;&quot;I&rsquo;m learning how to drown out the constant noise that is such an inseparable part of my life. I don&rsquo;t have to prove anything to anyone. I only have to follow my heart and concentrate on what I want to say to the world: I run my world.&quot; - Beyonc&eacute;

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So true... But you could have used question marks in some parts :)
musicispassion PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 17 2011 at 10:22 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 733 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot; Life is never easy for those who dream.&quot;<br /> There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

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ok thanks for the critism hope i spelled it right
CarrieAnn13 GOLD said...
on Jul. 17 2011 at 10:21 pm
CarrieAnn13 GOLD, Goodsoil, Other
12 articles 10 photos 1646 comments

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&quot;I love deadlines. I like the whooshing sound they make as they fly by.&quot; --Douglas Adams<br /> <br /> &quot;The object of life is not to be on the side of the majority, but to escape finding oneself in the ranks of the insane.&quot; --Marcus Aurelius

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My only criticism:

"...guess what you were there to."  'To' should be 'too'.

musicispassion PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 15 2011 at 11:48 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 733 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot; Life is never easy for those who dream.&quot;<br /> There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

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first thanks a bunch :p don't you think it's funny how parents act like they were always the perfect child and weren't ever the classic teen :P that's my opinion
Delictious GOLD said...
on Jul. 15 2011 at 10:13 pm
Delictious GOLD, Lubbock, Texas
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I like this one! A lot of people can relate I bet, I sure can. 
musicispassion PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 14 2011 at 9:54 pm
musicispassion PLATINUM, Perris, California
35 articles 0 photos 733 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot; Life is never easy for those who dream.&quot;<br /> There are so many other quotes i need pages to write them

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thanks i love the pic :P
redhairCat PLATINUM said...
on Jul. 14 2011 at 4:07 pm
redhairCat PLATINUM, Pebble Beach, California
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&quot;I can do anything!&quot;

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I like this one a lot! Good job!