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Lonely Suffering

July 12, 2011
By elliebelly BRONZE, Dallas, Georgia
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live for today, tomorrow may never come.

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Some lonely nights are spent flooding with tears,
Thinking about change and other fears,
I don't understand how or why,
I just hold a fake smile as the days go by.

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writingchick GOLD said...
on Jul. 16 2011 at 4:18 pm
writingchick GOLD, Huntington, Indiana
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&quot;Faith is taking another step without seeing the entire staircase.&quot;

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It's amazing how four lines hold so much meaning. I mean really. I could take so much out of this short poem. Part of me likes that it was short and to the point, but the other half wants more! This could be a great start to a short story! You should consider it (: Check out some of my work?

GOOD JOB!!

kk10TM GOLD said...
on Jul. 15 2011 at 1:58 pm
kk10TM GOLD, Burlington, Kentucky
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I agree with the other commenters. I enjoyed it. =] 
silent_reader BRONZE said...
on Jul. 15 2011 at 1:35 pm
silent_reader BRONZE, Columbia, Maryland
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&quot;I cannot live without books.&quot; - Thomas Jefferson

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it was short... but different... unique. i liked it a lot
NinjaGirl BRONZE said...
on Jul. 14 2011 at 9:14 pm
NinjaGirl BRONZE, Valley City, North Dakota
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Sad. I like your rhyme scheme and the emotion you put into this. Check out my work?
Live4literature SILVER said...
on Jul. 14 2011 at 2:10 pm
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Short but to the point, Enjoyed.