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Monster Monster

August 12, 2011
By GabriellaRoars PLATINUM, Madison, Wisconsin
GabriellaRoars PLATINUM, Madison, Wisconsin
23 articles 1 photo 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
"....I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad, The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had...."
-Tears of Fears-Mad World


Yell and yell for all you want,
Ba***rd, you’re going to he**,

Beat and beat on my face from my head to my feet,
One day you will see what I can really be,

Lock me up and cut me down,
Make it so it just hurts to move or even turn around,

So I can not run, nor can I hide,
From the monster that you kept inside.


The author's comments:
This is about abusive parents, family, and relationships.

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on Dec. 7 2012 at 10:58 am
GabriellaRoars PLATINUM, Madison, Wisconsin
23 articles 1 photo 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
"....I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad, The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had...."
-Tears of Fears-Mad World

Thanks so much

on Dec. 7 2012 at 10:58 am
GabriellaRoars PLATINUM, Madison, Wisconsin
23 articles 1 photo 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
"....I find it kind of funny, I find it kind of sad, The dreams in which I'm dying are the best I've ever had...."
-Tears of Fears-Mad World

Thanks, It was pretty hard to write just because it was like looking back on bad memories.  But im glad i did

on Jan. 4 2012 at 9:00 pm
shmam7624 SILVER, Evansville, Wisconsin
6 articles 0 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
We must become the change we want to see
-Mahatma Gandhi

Really love the ending. It definitely pulls everything together.

on Nov. 26 2011 at 11:06 am
KityraAnderson PLATINUM, Mercer Island, Washington
41 articles 1 photo 54 comments

Favorite Quote:
Nothing matters more than those who depend on you, emotionally or physically. Even if the situation is life or death, you have to be there for them, because they need you.

The poem is amazing, it really sums up how some people feel about their abusive parents.

I know people who have been abused and it strikes a chord with me... :) Good poem.


on Aug. 15 2011 at 9:28 pm
Regs_the_Shorty GOLD, Frankfort, Illinois
13 articles 0 photos 129 comments

Favorite Quote:
There are people who finish what they start and.....

Very good you should consider doing my poetry contest you get one comment and rating on the article of your choice just for participating Deadline is August 21st!!!!!! :)