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You're Gone

October 6, 2011
By mar_mar BRONZE, Toronto, Other
mar_mar BRONZE, Toronto, Other
4 articles 1 photo 5 comments

Softly spoken
Badly broken
Hurt inside
Lost my pride
I thought I knew what you'd do
Never thought that we'd be threw
Even though you lied and cheated
I'm the one that feels defeated
Now you’re gone, gone from here
But tell me why I still care
I meant it when I said I love you
Thought that what we had was true
It feels so long like it’s been years
Even though I still cry tear
I learned to things why you can’t see you see
I don’t know but loves not meant for me
Second now is I got burned
And those are the lessons that I have learn
Now next time before jumping in
I will know that love is a sin.


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mar_mar BRONZE said...
on Nov. 27 2011 at 5:42 pm
mar_mar BRONZE, Toronto, Other
4 articles 1 photo 5 comments

thanks. i know about the 6th line it was my bad but i dont know how t change it and i couldnt find a word to rhyme with here.

 


on Nov. 27 2011 at 5:40 pm
Kayla12w BRONZE, Clearfield, Utah
2 articles 1 photo 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
It's not Normal to be Normal.

Great Job! I can feel your pain, I hope this wasn't real, But if it was I appoligise. I enjoyed reading it emensly.

on Nov. 27 2011 at 5:38 pm
RaveFire PLATINUM, Vancouver, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;Sometimes You Have To Give Up Your Life To Save It.&quot; ~some book that i don&#039;t remember the name of<br /> <br /> &quot;Live Life Like There&#039;s No Yesterday&quot; ~ random billboard<br /> <br /> &quot;If No One Can Hurt You, Then Nobody Loves You&quot; ` ~ Kerli?

through* not threw (6th line)

here and care dont rhyme well lol but still good

i dont understand the 15th and 16th line...

i realy like this poem...really good job :)