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Am I All Alone?

October 23, 2011
By Loftus GOLD, Ocoee, Florida
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Loftus GOLD, Ocoee, Florida
11 articles 1 photo 88 comments

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"You have brains in your head. You have feet in your shoes. You can steer yourself any direction you choose. You're on your own, and you know what you know. And you are the one who'll decide where you'll go." -Dr. Seuss

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May I vanish
Into the night?
Where there is not a soul
In sight.

Maybe I’ll finally find,
A place with a gleaming white light.

Alone,
As always.
Solemn as can be,
Is someone willing,
To remove me from
My misery?

I see you in the distance.
Not a step you move.
If no one can save me
What more do I have to lose?

© Haley L., Anchorage, AK

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Goddess PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 21 2011 at 1:40 pm
Goddess PLATINUM, Connellsville, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
“Dream as if you'll live forever, live as if you'll die today.”

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YOur work is amazing. Please keep on writing.
kel_the_shell said...
on Nov. 29 2011 at 7:09 pm
kel_the_shell, Ronks, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"We accept the love we think we deserve." - The Perks of Being a Wallflower

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this is really good!!!! I love it!
Loftus GOLD said...
on Nov. 26 2011 at 1:38 pm
Loftus GOLD, Ocoee, Florida
11 articles 1 photo 88 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You have brains in your head. You have feet in your shoes. You can steer yourself any direction you choose. You're on your own, and you know what you know. And you are the one who'll decide where you'll go." -Dr. Seuss

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Sunshine than means so much! Thanks a lot!
sunshine7223 SILVER said...
on Nov. 26 2011 at 9:46 am
sunshine7223 SILVER, Holdenville, Oklahoma
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&quot;Afterall, a loose screw doesn&#039;t want to need, and a hammer doesn&#039;t want to be needed.&quot; -Me<br /> <br /> &quot;Those who observe with their eyes closed and mouths open, are usually not as wise as those who allow their minds to wander freely.&quot; -Me

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I love this poem! This one is super good. :) My favorite of yours so far. I love how it's short, but says so much. Not too many people can do that. Your one of the few extremely talented ones. :))
Mynameislindsayy SILVER said...
on Nov. 25 2011 at 7:19 pm
Mynameislindsayy SILVER, Seattle, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;I&#039;d rather just except who I am, what&#039;s the use of trying to change?&quot;

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I loved it! keep writting plese
Ellabell PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 12 2011 at 6:48 pm
Ellabell PLATINUM, Columbia, Missouri
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&quot;I have not yet begun to fight!&quot;<br /> John Paul Jones

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the last stanza is the best.
Br33na GOLD said...
on Nov. 3 2011 at 11:22 pm
Br33na GOLD, Dexter, Oregon
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Life is beautiful, but sometimes we forget what Life is an mix it up* but life is Life, The most beautiful thing you can remember :) - Me &lt;3

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amazeing !!!!! :)))))))
ReadWriteBreathe PLATINUM said...
on Oct. 31 2011 at 10:05 pm
ReadWriteBreathe PLATINUM, Pocatello, Idaho
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&quot;You have to consider the possibility that God does not like you&quot; Tyler Durden Fight Club

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I like this one too. It's so honest and true. I love how you say 'May I vanish Into the night? Where there is not a soul In sight" Really good writing.