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Mother

January 2, 2012
By browneyez16 GOLD, Hephzibah, Georgia
browneyez16 GOLD, Hephzibah, Georgia
10 articles 1 photo 50 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You may fail, but fall still fighting, don't give up whatever you do. Eyes front, head high, to the finish...see it through"



~See It Through by Edgar Albert Guest~


Build me up, tear me down
I can't live with you around
Life of lies and hateful hearts
This is where my journey starts

Broken mirrors, fragile glass
Piercing pieces of the past
All I know has fallen through
And for this, thanks is due to you

So many fears I'm forced to face
And memories I can't erase
Forever, your love I will seek
A promise that you'll never keep

And for this I shall always weep
Not on the surface, but down deep
I'll weep, and weep, and weep,
And weep.


The author's comments:
My real life moter inspired people me to write this. i just want people to understand that no matter how much I detest her, there is still a part of me that yearns for that motherly love.

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on Jan. 10 2012 at 7:07 pm
browneyez16 GOLD, Hephzibah, Georgia
10 articles 1 photo 50 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You may fail, but fall still fighting, don't give up whatever you do. Eyes front, head high, to the finish...see it through"



~See It Through by Edgar Albert Guest~

well then my condolences to you dear. :/

on Jan. 9 2012 at 10:00 pm
Michellebrain GOLD, Brooklyn, New York
12 articles 0 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
“A wise girl kisses but doesn't love, listens but doesn't believe, and leaves before she is left.”
-Marilyn Monroe

no problem, anytime...and i know exactly what you mean in this poem..

on Jan. 9 2012 at 9:39 pm
browneyez16 GOLD, Hephzibah, Georgia
10 articles 1 photo 50 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You may fail, but fall still fighting, don't give up whatever you do. Eyes front, head high, to the finish...see it through"



~See It Through by Edgar Albert Guest~

Thanks alice! I wasn't sure anyone would relate but i was hoping that SOMEONE would... :)

on Jan. 9 2012 at 9:38 pm
browneyez16 GOLD, Hephzibah, Georgia
10 articles 1 photo 50 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You may fail, but fall still fighting, don't give up whatever you do. Eyes front, head high, to the finish...see it through"



~See It Through by Edgar Albert Guest~

Thank you so much! This was actually one of my first that I was serious about....

on Jan. 9 2012 at 2:00 pm
Michellebrain GOLD, Brooklyn, New York
12 articles 0 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
“A wise girl kisses but doesn't love, listens but doesn't believe, and leaves before she is left.”
-Marilyn Monroe

this is a poem i an actually relate to. i really felt it. lol but anyway..amazing poem :)

on Jan. 8 2012 at 6:05 pm
babyrex4 SILVER, Buffalo, New York
5 articles 6 photos 191 comments

Favorite Quote:
\"You may only be someone in the world, but to someone else, you may be the world.\"

Author Unknown

This is beautiful! Keep writing poems, you have great sense with words!

on Jan. 4 2012 at 8:07 pm
browneyez16 GOLD, Hephzibah, Georgia
10 articles 1 photo 50 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You may fail, but fall still fighting, don't give up whatever you do. Eyes front, head high, to the finish...see it through"



~See It Through by Edgar Albert Guest~

I'm sorry that i named my poem the same as yours...I didn't know. I'm glad you like it but even more so am i glad tha you understand. :)

on Jan. 4 2012 at 8:05 pm
browneyez16 GOLD, Hephzibah, Georgia
10 articles 1 photo 50 comments

Favorite Quote:
"You may fail, but fall still fighting, don't give up whatever you do. Eyes front, head high, to the finish...see it through"



~See It Through by Edgar Albert Guest~

Thanks Acastillo!! This was my first poem I ever truly felt I could be somewhat proud of.

Acastillo GOLD said...
on Jan. 4 2012 at 5:17 pm
Acastillo GOLD, Phoenix, Arizona
11 articles 0 photos 114 comments

Favorite Quote:
Just because you have flaws, doesn't mean you aren't beautiful ~Zayn Malik

I really liked this and how it rhymed. Though I cannot say I can relate to this, I enjoyed reading it! Keep up the fantastic work! :)

TapTap SILVER said...
on Jan. 4 2012 at 5:12 pm
TapTap SILVER, New Berlin, Wisconsin
8 articles 0 photos 146 comments

Favorite Quote:
Dream as if you'll live forever, love like there is no tomorrow, dance like there is no one watching.

Ha! I have a poem called Mother too, but your is WAY better than mine. I love it! I feel this way all the time! You're not alone hun!