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Whispering People

February 8, 2012
By Blaker GOLD, Portland, Maine
Blaker GOLD, Portland, Maine
15 articles 9 photos 38 comments

The whispers
Are what closed you
Out of the world
You once
New

Your back was turned
Just long enough
For the rumors
To spread

The whispers
Turned to shouts
Blaring, like a horn
You fell
Into the deep



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Blaker GOLD said...
on Mar. 6 2012 at 2:14 pm
Blaker GOLD, Portland, Maine
15 articles 9 photos 38 comments
Oh my gosh.... I cannot believe that I actually did that. Well, I guess you learn from your mistakes.

on Mar. 6 2012 at 7:31 am
SuNshiNe007 ELITE, Magee Ms., Mississippi
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Never Give Up, And Know That God Will Always Love You!

I like this, great job. But, the last word on the first part where it says "New" should be "knew". Keep up the great work!