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O tragedy O tragedy

February 11, 2012
By bloodroselove SILVER, Spring Mills, Pennsylvania
bloodroselove SILVER, Spring Mills, Pennsylvania
7 articles 0 photos 33 comments

Oh tragedy o tragedy I say unto thee oh tragedy oh tragedy for she has come after me. My soul screams, tearing in pain my heart I fear will impede to beat. My eyes in awe of what I am standing before it can’t be no! I won’t allow it! This is a dream yes a dream another god forsaken nightmare. The river of life a steady stream following the tiny splintered cracks in the wood floor as if to run in fear and shock of what must have occurred. My cold frigid bones reach for the golden angel hair as it lies there motionless like a once striving sun. The flesh pale and cold to the touch oh already I fear the worst of fates became unto a soul. The birds sing jut outside as if to be shouting pleas, for me, to escape to run leave my beloved behind but I cant I mustn’t. I chill traces my spine shuttering me to the core the bitter December wind? The tear that Is tracing my cheek? Or maybe it’s the silence. The utter desolate grotesque kind of quiet. A quiet that makes one seem to cringe and listen to that tiny voice in the back of your mind. I cant seem to break this feeling. My lovers’ eyes laying there fixed into the void black with nothing she stares at me or so it seems. They follow me as I pace the small dark room floor boards creaking under me with every step. Are they trying to tell me something? Me body collapses before her oh misery oh agony what is it that I am to do! I have lost my only meaning to live. Like a pawn to the master the overwhelming agony controls me envelops me, takes me into its control.

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on Apr. 8 2012 at 9:58 pm
TheGirlWhoReachesForStars SILVER, Morrisville, North Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
\"Imperfection is beauty; madness is genius.
and its better to be absolutely ridiculous
than absolutely boring.\"
-Marilyn Monroe

Sooo beautiful. <3 You're so incredibly talented!

on Apr. 4 2012 at 8:19 pm
Graybass17 BRONZE, Aurora, Colorado
4 articles 0 photos 10 comments

Favorite Quote:
"We accept the love we think we deserve"

I really enjoyed this poem. Great feel of it and so story like! very in depth, keep writing!

on Mar. 28 2012 at 12:40 pm
Anonymous_7 SILVER, Branson, Missouri
6 articles 0 photos 118 comments

Favorite Quote:
-The only time you can get away with murder is when writing a book!

WOW! I can honestly say that this one of the best poems on here that i'v read. Great job!

on Mar. 20 2012 at 3:25 pm
Kit-Kait BRONZE, Amherst, Virginia
1 article 0 photos 54 comments
I'm not calling it bad, but maybe you should space the sentences. It'd be easier to read and people would love good structure. Other than that tiny thing, I love it! It shows a meaning that I can't really decribe... You should keep writing, you're really good at it. And, also, always ask people for their opinion. It can make you a even better writer, and you can maybe make a book of poems, or just a book.

on Mar. 12 2012 at 10:13 pm
FaultyStars SILVER, Ottawa, Other
6 articles 1 photo 12 comments

Favorite Quote:
“Life is not measured by the number of breaths we take, but by the moments that take our breath away." - Maya Angelou

Other than some minor grammatical errors, I quite enjoyed this. It was very poetic. Keep up the great work.

on Mar. 12 2012 at 7:13 pm
BriRose2014 SILVER, Fremont, Nebraska
9 articles 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A man reserves his true and deepest love not for the species of woman in whose company he finds himself electrified and enkindled, but for that one in whose company he may feel tenderly drowsy."
-George Jean Nathan

love it!!!!!!!!!!

on Mar. 9 2012 at 7:52 pm
WrittenEmotions PLATINUM, Fairhope, Alabama
32 articles 0 photos 209 comments

Favorite Quote:
The only people who don't get anywhere are the people who don't dream of a better place for themselves...

You have a way with words that's very compelling.... This was amazing, simply amazing to me. If this doesn't sound too weird I'd like to say guys who write poetry,to me, are automatically ten times more attractive to me.(: great!

on Mar. 2 2012 at 6:47 pm
lvamp1192 SILVER, Schuylerville, New York
7 articles 0 photos 9 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Nothing is Trivial..."
-Brandon Lee

very haunting i couldnt wait to get to the next word...the next line ahmazing