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Snow and Skating

January 25, 2013
By IndigoElisabeth SILVER, Woodbury, New Jersey
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IndigoElisabeth SILVER, Woodbury, New Jersey
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John 1:1

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Skaters on the lake
Silent trees watching
Beautiful ice
Bitter cold
Hockey goals
Hanging limbs
Waving sticks
Windless branches
Speedy skates
Solid guardians

© Simon I., Lansing, NY

The author's comments:
This came to me when I was looking out the window a few hours before a snowstorm was supposeed to arrive.There were skaters on the lake behind my house, hidden slightly by the trees.
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IndigoElisabeth SILVER said...
on Apr. 27 2013 at 7:23 am
IndigoElisabeth SILVER, Woodbury, New Jersey
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Wow, I can't believe people like this so much! I didn't think it was very good, myself. Part of why I put it on here. Thanks, guys!
IndigoElisabeth SILVER said...
on Apr. 27 2013 at 7:20 am
IndigoElisabeth SILVER, Woodbury, New Jersey
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John 1:1

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Thanks! I'm glad you liked it.
mnm08 BRONZE said...
on Apr. 25 2013 at 8:05 pm
mnm08 BRONZE, Grande Prairie, Texas
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That was simply beautiful =) ! I loved it.  
IndigoElisabeth SILVER said...
on Apr. 14 2013 at 9:15 pm
IndigoElisabeth SILVER, Woodbury, New Jersey
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Thank you, guys! I appreciate it. :D
Mollybug16 BRONZE said...
on Apr. 14 2013 at 4:12 pm
Mollybug16 BRONZE, Cleveland, Tennessee
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I agree with HanBan12.... awesome ... love it 5/5
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on Apr. 13 2013 at 8:49 pm
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Awesome! Very shory yet sweet. I love how the imagery all flows togther perfectly.... ur very talented! :P
IndigoElisabeth SILVER said...
on Feb. 9 2013 at 1:03 pm
IndigoElisabeth SILVER, Woodbury, New Jersey
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Actually, I had no idea where thus was going when I wrote it. Mostly i was just messing around with alliteration and description, and it came out like a poem, which surprised me. I'm not very good at poetry; I'm more of a prose writer. Anyway, thanks for commenting and reading!
In_Love_with_Writing GOLD said...
on Feb. 8 2013 at 10:00 pm
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The first thought that came to me when reading this was exactly what the title alluded to: skating and winter. I'm not sure what exactly you were hoping to achieve with this (were you trying to describe a winter scene?), but I did like it a lot. :)