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Makeup/ Break up

January 23, 2013
By nightrunner23 PLATINUM, Greene, New York
nightrunner23 PLATINUM, Greene, New York
33 articles 0 photos 26 comments

Favorite Quote:
If you treat me like a princess, I'll treat you like a prince.
If you treat me like a game, I'll show you how it's played.


You know, my makeup,
Is a lot like you.
You can both make me feel
Shiny and new.
I keep you close,
Just in case.
I let you both
Touch my face.
You make my cheeks
Fill with color.
When you’re not around
my shine is duller.
You both make
my smile wider.
Even when I’m forced
to stand beside her.
You both run
When I cry.
I crumble
When you say goodbye,
And worst is that when you’re
not complimenting me.
There is someone else
You go and see.



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on Mar. 29 2013 at 10:28 pm
LexusMarie PLATINUM, Las Cruces, New Mexico
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Favorite Quote:
The more control you have over yourself, the less control others have over you.

Hi, this is great! I really enjoyed reading this!

AriBow GOLD said...
on Feb. 5 2013 at 3:38 pm
AriBow GOLD, Edina, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"find a place and call it home"

good! xxx that was very good!

on Feb. 3 2013 at 3:00 pm
EmmettHerculeLaFave SILVER, Tucson, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
"We have it in our power to begin the world over again." -Thomas Paine

Very well written and effective, 5/5!

on Feb. 2 2013 at 12:41 pm
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
214 articles 14 photos 1159 comments

Favorite Quote:
“If you're losing your soul and you know it, then you've still got a soul left to lose”
― Charles Bukowski

Loved this! I'm giving it 5 stars:)

kmcn33 BRONZE said...
on Feb. 2 2013 at 12:11 am
kmcn33 BRONZE, Needham, Massachusetts
4 articles 3 photos 34 comments

Favorite Quote:
I was much too far out all my life / And not waving but drowning

This is so creative i  love it!

ZachhM said...
on Feb. 1 2013 at 7:25 pm
I like this poem. It's innocent and you can clearly see the comparison. Enjoyed reading it

on Feb. 1 2013 at 9:30 am
Sakuya PLATINUM, Richmond, Virginia
39 articles 12 photos 63 comments
I really like this but instead of just stating the comparision to the person making you feel beautiful and new use a description but I really like this poem it's really good