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He Saw

February 4, 2013
By freedomwriter98 BRONZE, Indianapolis, Indiana
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freedomwriter98 BRONZE, Indianapolis, Indiana
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You can either swim to the shore of possibilities; or drown in a sea of what-if's ~ Myself<3

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She walks the halls with her shoulders slumped, and head hung low.

She doesn't talk, for there's nothing to be said.

When she smiles, it's so no one can see through her mask.

She sets her wall high, to block out intruders.

She was truly invisible.

Then he came, and he saw.

He bombarded her heavily guarded wall. When he did, he saw the pain she hid so well. He saw the lies behind her smile.

He saw her.

© Hope A., Merrillville, IN

The author's comments:
This is based on me. When I hid my true self from the world, the only person who saw through it all was the new kid who is now my best friend (I may or may not be totally in love with him now)
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