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Broken Windows

May 17, 2013
By Ari3693 BRONZE, Longwood, Florida
Ari3693 BRONZE, Longwood, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
“You know you've read a good book when you turn the last page and feel a little as if you have lost a friend.”- Paul Sweeney


Broken windows in the dark--
Torn apart by lusty needs.

Does the pagan thirst succeed--
Or does it crumble into a used up heap?
Does it glisten like the sun--
Tempting those who have not won?

Where do the dead men go--
On the shores of milky bays,
Or do they scurry through lonely ways?

What becomes of the sharpened knives-
Are they thrown or do they die?

Where does this vicious cycle end--
In a friendly fire or a peaceful land?



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on Jun. 6 2013 at 9:56 pm
coco7misty SILVER, Acton, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"You can't take the sky from me." - Joss Whedom, "Ballad of Serenity"

Really good, strong images. I like it a lot. Its a little vague but I think that adds to the effect.

HazelGrace said...
on Jun. 6 2013 at 9:40 pm
Hmmmm. I like it. Nice description! I think you could addmore so it's more clear exactly what human/emotional situations the metaphors are referring to, because they're absolutely fantastic. It's just hard to interpret the other half of them... does that make sense? hahah well nice job anyways :)