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The Time Loop

August 13, 2013
By Patty_whack19 GOLD, Meadow Vista, California
Patty_whack19 GOLD, Meadow Vista, California
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Favorite Quote:
"To give anything less than your best is to sacrifice the gift" -Steve Prefontaine


Tick, tock, tick, clock, the sound
Time, He has come
He has power - you will see
Forwards, backwards
Eternity is His power
Power? His is eternity
Backwards, forwards
See will you - power has He
Come has He? Time?
Sound the clock - tick, tock,
Tick...



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on Aug. 19 2013 at 6:51 pm
DragonRiddler BRONZE, Meadow Vista, California
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Time personified! I love this :)

on Aug. 14 2013 at 1:06 pm
Poetrylover_1 SILVER, Norh Charleston, South Carolina
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Well, i do  not know if i caught the right message from this poem, but i'll give it a try. I think the poem was steered in a religious direction,"Eternity is his power, tick tock, he has come."  telling people that time for living is winding down. This was a very refreshing poem and i hope that you continue to  inspire others through writing.