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Escape

September 28, 2013
By Orchid.cereal GOLD, Bend, Oregon
Orchid.cereal GOLD, Bend, Oregon
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Running,

hiding,

watching silently,

i’m free finally,

listening,

wishing,

wanting,

love and kindness,

someone with words and guidance,

a home of warm smiles,

i would walk millions of miles,

i would walk,run,fly,even if it took forever,

i would do anything to make it better,

anything to escape.


and i’m still here

locked up

so many tears

wanting to be free

look at the sea,

how it stretches for miles,

like broken hearts in piles,

it never ends,

wanting to return again,

all the pain from today,

hoping it will go away,



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on Dec. 26 2013 at 7:25 pm
SlowEternity BRONZE, Big Lake, Minnesota
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Favorite Quote:
Love is like a wildfire; It knows no boundaries.- Em

Nice job, great imagery!

on Oct. 28 2013 at 8:30 pm
Orchid.cereal GOLD, Bend, Oregon
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thanx for looking at my poem.

quoter said...
on Oct. 15 2013 at 10:56 pm
quoter, Glenview, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
"If who I am is what I have and what I have is lost, then who am I?"

This is good! It's like my poem.. kind of.. please check it out at TeenInk.com/poetry/free_verse/article/548674/Breaking/

on Oct. 15 2013 at 8:59 pm
Orchid.cereal GOLD, Bend, Oregon
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thanx im not really good at writing poetry im just trying.

on Oct. 14 2013 at 11:34 pm
Shade3043 DIAMOND, Shade3043 Did This, In Case Of Anonymous, Other
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Favorite Quote:
When I was a boy, I would always hear scary things in the news and my mother would say to me, "Always look for the helpers. Everywhere you look you will always find people helping." - Fred Rogers

Once again, good poem, but it feels like it's lacking something.... Oh, and I noticed the spacing is kind of odd, you might want to fix that..... I dunno..... I find this one better than your other ones, though. Good wording, nice imagery. :) 4/5

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on Oct. 9 2013 at 3:34 pm
Feefee BRONZE, Bend, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
“Life is an opportunity, benefit from it.
Life is beauty, admire it.
Life is a dream, realize it.
Life is a challenge, meet it.
Life is a duty, complete it.
Life is a game, play it.
Life is a promise, fulfill it.
Life is sorrow, overcome it.
Life is a song, sing it.
Life is a struggle, accept it.
Life is a tragedy, confront it.
Life is an adventure, dare it.
Life is luck, make it.
Life is too precious, do not destroy it.
Life is life, fight for it.

Omg nieves! this is the most amazing thing ever! you said everything i feel in this! there is no better wayt to describe, im so glad you showed me teen ink