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A Love Affair with Orange Juice MAG

October 20, 2013
By FinnWinterfall GOLD, Rochester, Massachusetts
FinnWinterfall GOLD, Rochester, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
"There, there."

I take you home with me
From the market,
All the while restraining myself
From drinking you
Until morning time.
But I can't bear it…
I want you,
I NEED you,
You are the love of my life.
So I break under the pressure
And take out a glass,
I open the fridge
Take you in my hand,
And pooouur.
You are now in my cup,
I hope you don't mind.
I say a prayer to the fruit gods
And pay my respects.
Then I take a sip.
And another,
And another,
I can't stop.
I keep gulping away
To the very
Oh no!
I realize as I look at the empty jug.
My one and only love is…
I scream
I shout
I cry
I am ready to die.
Oh, what wouldn't I do,
To get myself some more of you.

The author's comments:
Obviously I have an obsession with Orange Juice.

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on Jun. 11 2015 at 10:29 am
elsie01px2019 BRONZE, Shanghai, Other
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Way to make something simple hilarious! Write on!

on Nov. 5 2013 at 5:14 pm
Chubby_Hearts PLATINUM, Beaverton, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
“Each and every one of us has a fire that burns inside us. They can try like hell to put it out, but as long as we know in our minds who we are meant to be, they will never stand a chance.”
― Andy Biersack

OMG! I think I am scarred for life now! This is Hillarious and I am going to go get me some orange juice! lol

on Nov. 5 2013 at 5:13 pm
ElisaTheDuck ELITE, Rigaud, Other
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Favorite Quote:

one word: LOL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Tamy24 said...
on Oct. 27 2013 at 1:12 pm
Tamy24, Brooklyn, New York
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Favorite Quote:
" Be daring, be different, be impractical, be anything that will assert integrity of purpose and imaginative vision against the play-it-safers, the creatures of the commonplace, the slaves of the ordinary." Cecil Beaton- note to self

This was AWESOME. The imagery that you used made me want to read more and that's what a Writer does. Really nice.

on Oct. 26 2013 at 11:49 am
abividrey SILVER, Delphi, Indiana
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this was AWESOME! reminds me of something my cousin Jeff would write! lol

on Oct. 25 2013 at 3:45 pm
Fallen_ PLATINUM, Quakertown, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
" a shattered world is only an opening into a new beginning with laughs, smiles, and love all around enter the world of the light and away from the broken darkness"

BEST POEM EVA! anything with onrange juice is awesome way to go i like then end were you scream nad cry best part

on Oct. 25 2013 at 3:44 pm
City_Of_Angels PLATINUM, West Des Moines, Iowa
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