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Would it be much better if you knew nothing about me?

November 18, 2013
By Ahhni PLATINUM, Battle Creek, Michigan
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"Your naked body should only belong to those who fall in love with your naked soul."
- Charlie Chaplin

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This takes me away
I'm nothing without you
My love, let us drink Cabernet
And swing by the bay
I'll throw my hair up
And you can kiss me goodnight
I'll fall in love again
With stars in my hands
And your love in my heart.

© Allison H., Vancouver, WA

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My darling Elijah S., how I love you so <3
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This article has 6 comments.

Ahhni PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 11 2013 at 11:31 am
Ahhni PLATINUM, Battle Creek, Michigan
21 articles 0 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Your naked body should only belong to those who fall in love with your naked soul."
- Charlie Chaplin

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My Darling, I miss you oh so much <3.. I just want and crave to be in your arms again.. I love you..<3 forever my dear
PoeticStranger SILVER said...
on Dec. 11 2013 at 11:24 am
PoeticStranger SILVER, Battle Creek, Michigan
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"I became insane, with long intervals of horrible sanity."
~Edgar Allan Poe

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Love.. <3 I miss you so.. <3 !!
Ahhni PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 26 2013 at 11:42 am
Ahhni PLATINUM, Battle Creek, Michigan
21 articles 0 photos 25 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Your naked body should only belong to those who fall in love with your naked soul."
- Charlie Chaplin

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My darling, I would love to change the title because it is absently there. I don't care for it much and would love your input on this poem that just so happens to be about you and I <3 If you have an idea on a new one.. Tell me c: I love you so so so much! <3 
PoeticStranger SILVER said...
on Nov. 25 2013 at 12:09 pm
PoeticStranger SILVER, Battle Creek, Michigan
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Love..<3 I really did enjoy it. (: However, the name made me sad.. =/ May I ask the reasoning behind such title? <3
Ahhni PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 25 2013 at 11:57 am
Ahhni PLATINUM, Battle Creek, Michigan
21 articles 0 photos 25 comments

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"Your naked body should only belong to those who fall in love with your naked soul."
- Charlie Chaplin

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Awh! You just read this my love c: I love you so much my dear, to the moon and back and forevermore! Mmm my love <3 I'll never let go..<3
PoeticStranger SILVER said...
on Nov. 25 2013 at 10:16 am
PoeticStranger SILVER, Battle Creek, Michigan
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"I became insane, with long intervals of horrible sanity."
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Mmm..<3 Ahni, darling, love, hun<3. I love you to the moon are forevermore <3.. Take my hand love.. Lets..<3