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A Depth of Darkness

February 6, 2015
By Turbo223 SILVER, Lancaster, Wisconsin
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Turbo223 SILVER, Lancaster, Wisconsin
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Is there a way to escape something unescapable?

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Do you stare into it, or do you approach it,

Do you walk around it, or wait as you sit?
It shows an opposite world, filled with cold and fear,
Still I stare into my soul, my thoughts becoming clear.
The feeling of sorrow and pain uplifting my mind,
My fate feeling printed, feeling ready to sign.
Tell me this; let me know, of what you think I am,
And help me see the light, see the person they disband.

© Arianna J., Temecula, CA

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I created this late one night as I stared outside, and started typing. I looked into my soul and typed more. Then rhyme comes to rhyme, here it is. 

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Ana143 GOLD said...
on Feb. 13 2015 at 11:31 am
Ana143 GOLD, Bolivar, Ohio
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&quot;Your always beautiful in my eyes&quot;<br /> &quot;Be who you are not what someone else wants you to be&quot;

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welcome! :)
Turbo223 SILVER said...
on Feb. 12 2015 at 4:43 pm
Turbo223 SILVER, Lancaster, Wisconsin
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Is there a way to escape something unescapable?

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Thank you!
Ana143 GOLD said...
on Feb. 12 2015 at 1:20 pm
Ana143 GOLD, Bolivar, Ohio
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&quot;Your always beautiful in my eyes&quot;<br /> &quot;Be who you are not what someone else wants you to be&quot;

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Its just really, There are now works to describe it in my opinon. Nice work! :)
Turbo223 SILVER said...
on Feb. 11 2015 at 1:09 pm
Turbo223 SILVER, Lancaster, Wisconsin
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Is there a way to escape something unescapable?

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Thank you :)
fearlessAngel17 PLATINUM said...
on Feb. 9 2015 at 1:52 pm
fearlessAngel17 PLATINUM, Lake Alfred, Florida
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love the depth of it, you can tell you looked deep into you soul