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lost.

March 18, 2015
By Losutus_soul BRONZE, Indianapolis, Indiana
Losutus_soul BRONZE, Indianapolis, Indiana
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i can't see anything anymore i have forgotten all things i am forever lost and lost is all that i am.... i want to be found i want to be saved but that is pointless now, i will never be unbound, but what i want most now. is not to be found. nor to be unbound, i want to be remembered, for the burnign ember of my soul. never  being put out. until now. in my last few seconds of sanity, i just want to say i am sorry for everything i will do and have done.


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i am a lost soul, i relize that now


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on Feb. 25 2016 at 12:49 pm
Wordfreak SILVER, Aurora, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
&quot;He who makes a beast out of himself gets rid of the pain of being a man.&quot; - Doc Johnson<br /> &quot;It&#039;s not the size of the dog in the fight. It&#039;s the size of the fight in the dog.&quot; -Ivan Moody, FFDP

I really like it! It's very deep and very mournful. The only criticism I have is that maybe you should take more time to work on your editing, specifically your capitalization and punctuation. Overall, I really like it! I'm gonna add this to my favorites.

MBC1215 said...
on Feb. 25 2016 at 12:48 pm
You a jerk Hammad!

HammadWaseem said...
on Jan. 12 2016 at 3:07 pm
HammadWaseem, Lahore, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Be proud of who you are.<br /> -Eminem<br /> <br /> You can&#039;t see me<br /> -John Cena<br /> <br /> Ooh, somebody stop me!<br /> -Mask

It sucks! You need more practice!