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You & Me
October 8, 2009
I saw you today,
But you're not as I remember.
Your eyes no longer sparkle,
You've changed since last September.
You were so full of life,
Yet now you are so cold.
Your personality has tarnished,
When you once had a heart of gold.
You fell out of my life,
Just like leaves in the fall.
We were so very close,
Now you're not here at all.
You saw me today,
I'm the same as you remember.
My eyes still sparkle,
I've not changed since last September.
© Stephanie F., Garnerville, NY
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pumpkinsker said...
on Jan. 7 2011 at 8:27 pm
this is an AMZING thing! :)
. said...
on Jan. 5 2011 at 11:25 am
This gave me such a good idea for a love letter to my gf sandy
This was really good!!!! It reminded me of this friend i had but she went to another school and changed...when i saw her last week she seemed distant and more involved with her friends on the other end of the phonerather than the ones with her. i guess this sonnet of yours kind of put it all into words on a page. =D
vtuperationem.laus said...
on Dec. 24 2010 at 8:18 pm
this poem is lovely in the sense that it rhymes and has a good topic but it's not poetic. The reason i read poetry is to gain as much as possible from as few words as i can. This poem is just words, there is emotion attached to them but nothing deeper, noting that makes one need to read it over again. Go Deeper and you will do better; you have a knack for the rhyme part, not make your words speak more than they're worth.
Claire Gallo BRONZE said...
on Dec. 24 2010 at 5:01 pm
also thanks for sharing! I too have watched a friend change and not really for the better.. it's sad but also a reality that we face.. people change. .we change and sometimes we don't even realize it...
mr poet said...
on Dec. 24 2010 at 1:18 pm
that was great it reminded of one of my old friends, we were best friends. i saw him recently he wore all black and his colorful personality was dull, and gray..=(
coolheart said...
on Dec. 19 2010 at 9:44 pm
i love this peice thanks for sharing and it tottaly true its sad again thanks=)
KatieBug_SlayEm BRONZE said...
on Dec. 12 2010 at 8:23 pm
this poem is really good it made me think about me and my friends .
nikisrainebo BRONZE said...
on Dec. 10 2010 at 1:10 pm
I thought this poem was beautiful and well-written. He had very good flow and rhythm. Also, I thought the image of "sparkling eyes" was excellent.
WallyGirl said...
on Dec. 8 2010 at 10:34 pm
This is amazing.(:
adrienne131 BRONZE said...
on Dec. 8 2010 at 5:46 pm
Wow! This is very well written and thought evoking. I wonder if your friend realizes the way that he or she has changed.
. said...
on Dec. 8 2010 at 10:43 am
I like this. I usually have high standards for judging work but i like this.
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 7 2010 at 10:11 pm
Thank you:) I appreciate the comment
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 7 2010 at 10:09 pm
I'm glad you like it:)
I'm sorry, I hope everything works out for you
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 7 2010 at 10:08 pm
Me too, I think that really says something about someone's character...
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 7 2010 at 10:08 pm
You are so very welcome! And thank you for the compliment:)
