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EC+AM=4ever Chapter 12 Part 2

September 24, 2009
By TeamJacobArchuleta ELITE, Chicago, Illinois
TeamJacobArchuleta ELITE, Chicago, Illinois
183 articles 7 photos 484 comments

Favorite Quote:
He's the one I call in the middle of the night. He's the one who makes everything alright. He loves me with no regret...I just haven't found him yet.


My cell phone buzzed and I glanced over at it, not wanting to talk to anyone. But when I saw that it was Kristy calling me, I picked up right away. "Hi, Kristy,"

"Hi, Evalynne." She sounded a bit tense.

"What's up?" I asked.

"I'm at Sadie's right now. Well..." she trailed off at the end. "Why don't you just come and meet me?"

"Ok," I replied, confused. We both hung up and I went downstairs. I slipped on a pair of flip flops and called out, "Mom, I'm going to Sadie's!" Then I walked out the door.

When I walked into Sadie's, I saw Kristy sitting at a table. I walked over to her, "Why'd you want me to meet you here?" I asked.

She bit her lip, "Look at the table in the back corner." she murmured as I sat down.

I looked over to find Julianne sitting at the table. And Ash was sitting across from her. She was twirling her hair and talking to him while he listened. And her hand was set on the table, with Ash's hand placed on top of it.

My eyes widened in shock. Then I turned back to face Kristy, luckily Ash hadn't noticed me. "Oh my gosh," I said to myself.

"I can't believe Ash is cheating on you." Kristy told me.

"He's not. I broke up with him earlier today." I replied.

"Why'd you do that?" she asked.

"Because I felt bad because we were dating behind his mom's back. He pretended to choose her so we could date while she was at work. But I saw the look on her face when she thought he'd chosen her. She was truly happy."

"So your guilt got the best of you?"

"Yeah, but I didn't think that Ash would move on so quickly. I thought he actually loved me." And then tears came to my eyes. "But I was obviously mistaken." Then I stood up and left the restaurant.

When I got home, I ran up to my room, locked the door, and cried. "Sweetie, are you ok?" Mom asked from outside my room.

"Just leave me alone!" I shouted.

"Evalynne, open up the door. We can talk about this. What happened?" she asked.

I stalked over to my door and yanked it open. "Ash has a new girlfriend. He never loved me and he never will, ok? There's nothing left to talk about!" Then I slammed the door shut.

I had never yelled at my mom like that before. And I felt bad, especially since this wasn't her fault, but I couldn't help it. I was so stupid for thinking that Ash really loved me. I should have known that he would end up with Julianne. She was popular, beautiful, a cheerleader. Her and Ash were meant to be.

My phone buzzed, it was Kristy. I picked up but didn't say anything.

"Evalynne, are you ok?" she asked me.

"No," I choked out in between sobs.

"Do you want me to come over?"

"No,"

"Well is there anything I can do to help?" she said with concern in her voice.

"No,"

"Can you say anything besides no?"

"Yes,"

She laughed softly and then sighed. "Well if you want to talk or anything, just call me. I'm still your best friend."

"Ok," I replied, feeling a tiny bit better since Kristy and I were still friends. "And Kristy, I'm sorry. You're a true friend, and Ash isn't. He never was. He told me loved me and I was stupid enough to believe him."

"Evalynne, don't beat yourself up over this." she told me.

"But it's my own fault! If I hadn't fallen for him, I wouldn't be sitting in my room, crying right now! He played me like a fool. And I fell for him."

"Well it's not your fault that Ash is a jerk. He's a player and he doesn't deserve you. Just forget about him." she said.

"I can't just forget, Kristy. I trusted him." I cried.

"I know that, but he's not even worth your time. So just forget him. And you shouldn't love him anymore either. If he can move on that easily, so can you."

"I don't love him, Kristy. I love who I thought he was." I told her. "A part of me still thinks that he loves me, that him and Julianne aren't together. But then reality takes over and I realize that he's gone."

"I'm sorry." she said. "But I'm your friend and I'm going to help you through this." she assured me.

"I know." Then I heard a laugh, Julianne's laugh. I looked over to find Ash's window open. Him and Julianne were walking into his room, talking. "Oh my gosh, he really hates me."

"What are you talking about?" she asked.

"His window is open and him and Julianne just walked in." I replied.

"Then shut your window. Don't let him get to you." she told me.

"Too late," I glanced back out my window. They were paying absolutely no attention to me. "I have to go now." And without waiting for a reply, I hung up.

I stood up and approached my window. And as I began to shut it, Julianne called out to me. "Hi, Evalynne!" She smirked when she saw my tear-streaked face.

I looked at Ash and he met my gaze. His eyes were dark and unfamiliar. Not the happy, sparkly blue eyes I'd come to know so well. "Hi." I replied blankly.

"Ash and I are going out now. Sorry about you're break-up." she said without meaning it.

"It's ok. I just hope you two are happy together. You're meant for each other." Then I shut my window and pulled down my blinds.

When my window was open, I had spotted Ash's mom's car in the driveway. She allowed Julianne to come into her house. She allowed her to be with Ash. She thought that Ash and Julianne were right for each other.

But two wrongs don't make a right.


The author's comments:
Here's part 2 of chapter 12! Who'd have ever thought that Ash and The Wicked Witch of Westchester would end up together? Evalynne certainly didn't.

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on Dec. 27 2009 at 10:45 pm
TeamJacobArchuleta ELITE, Chicago, Illinois
183 articles 7 photos 484 comments

Favorite Quote:
He's the one I call in the middle of the night. He's the one who makes everything alright. He loves me with no regret...I just haven't found him yet.

LOL, thanks so much! And don't worry, more is on the way, LOL. They just take FOREVER to upload!

on Dec. 27 2009 at 4:12 pm
pandaLICIOUS SILVER, Portland, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
“For beautiful eyes, look for the good in others; for beautiful lips, speak only words of kindness; and for poise, walk with the knowledge that you are never alone.” -Audrey Hepburn

Haha thanks! I read all chapters up to chapter 21, it's soooo good! I'm dying to see what happens next! It made me really mad what a player Ash was! Pls post your entire story! You totally left me hanging! Good job!

on Dec. 25 2009 at 10:55 pm
TeamJacobArchuleta ELITE, Chicago, Illinois
183 articles 7 photos 484 comments

Favorite Quote:
He's the one I call in the middle of the night. He's the one who makes everything alright. He loves me with no regret...I just haven't found him yet.

OMG, THANK U SOOOOO MUCH!!!! That really means alot to me!!!!! I'm so glad that u like my story, and I'm the same way as you. I don't like Ash's mom AT ALL, but I sorta have mixed feelings on Kristy's character. I guess it's kinda weird since I'm the one who created their characters, but oh well. LOL :)

eMiLyP GOLD said...
on Dec. 24 2009 at 12:08 pm
eMiLyP GOLD, Jeannette, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
Life is short; speak your mind, say what ya wanna say, and do what ya wanna do (as long as you don't get caught!).

OMGEEEEE! I've read the whole thing and I didn't want to comment on every sinlge part because you would SO get tired of my super-long ramble-y comments. This is by far one of the best stories I've ever read! I love it! I HAVE to tell my bff about it because she'll love it just as much as I do! I do think it is a little rushed, but that's how all of my stories are, so don't worry. Ash's mom is SUCH a witch with a capital B! I don't like her. And I'm still not sure if I like Kristy. It seems like there's something with her. I guess I'll have to keep reading and find out! You did an awesome job and I have a feeling that one day this will be published and it will sell more copies than Twilight! LOL.

StarsMoon said...
on Dec. 24 2009 at 3:22 am
StarsMoon, Lehi, Utah
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pretty good...

im interested to know what happens next...

:) good luck!! (:

on Dec. 22 2009 at 2:11 pm
TeamJacobArchuleta ELITE, Chicago, Illinois
183 articles 7 photos 484 comments

Favorite Quote:
He's the one I call in the middle of the night. He's the one who makes everything alright. He loves me with no regret...I just haven't found him yet.

LOL, thanks so much! I'm so glad you like it! :)<br />
And actually, I have the entire story finished, but I've only posted up to chapter 23 on here. However, there was a screw-up so some of the chapters are labeled wrong. But if you want to make it a lot less confusing, you can just go onto this website called Quizilla .com and search for ec plus am=4ever. I have up to chapter 21 posted on there. Thanks again for reading my story :)

on Dec. 21 2009 at 11:45 pm
pandaLICIOUS SILVER, Portland, Oregon
8 articles 0 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
“For beautiful eyes, look for the good in others; for beautiful lips, speak only words of kindness; and for poise, walk with the knowledge that you are never alone.” -Audrey Hepburn

I LOVE THIS!!!! PLEASE WRITE MORE, OR ELSE I WILL CRY, LITERALLY!

on Dec. 21 2009 at 6:31 pm
TeamJacobArchuleta ELITE, Chicago, Illinois
183 articles 7 photos 484 comments

Favorite Quote:
He's the one I call in the middle of the night. He's the one who makes everything alright. He loves me with no regret...I just haven't found him yet.

LOL, actually I have a bunch more chapters posted on here but they kinda got messed up. But I've been telling people to go onto Quizilla .com and search EC plus AM=4ever because I have up to chapter 21 on there. I'm glad you like my story though! :)

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on Dec. 21 2009 at 10:44 am
Abbz7193 GOLD, Denver, Colorado
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Don't take life to seriously... nobody gets out alive anyways! :)

YOU NEED TO WRITE MORE THAT IS LIKE.... AMAZING!!! WRITE AWAY!

on Nov. 28 2009 at 12:08 pm
ajparker BRONZE, Robinson, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
If its not noon yet don't bother waking me up! ;)

I just finished it now im going to see the blindside but 4 some reason I want 2 call the guy I like and ask him out!!!??? wierd rite!!!!!!!!!!

Tippleeee said...
on Nov. 9 2009 at 4:35 pm
Tippleeee, Liverpool, Other
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please please please please pleaseee dont tell me that is he end i read all 12 chapters in one day i was that interested...talk about capturing the reader!....a milion times amazing pleaaassss write more...i wish i could write like you!..XxX

on Nov. 7 2009 at 3:55 pm
TeamJacobArchuleta ELITE, Chicago, Illinois
183 articles 7 photos 484 comments

Favorite Quote:
He's the one I call in the middle of the night. He's the one who makes everything alright. He loves me with no regret...I just haven't found him yet.

Thanx soooo much!!! It would've never gotten first place without the support from all of you guys! Thank you so much! :)

on Nov. 7 2009 at 2:22 pm
Annabelle7614, Nunyabusiness, Georgia
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This is my favorite personal quote.

Congrats on getting first place!!! This really deserved it!!

on Oct. 20 2009 at 5:37 pm
live.love. BRONZE, Canton, Ohio
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more please:)

on Oct. 18 2009 at 9:42 am
TeamJacobArchuleta ELITE, Chicago, Illinois
183 articles 7 photos 484 comments

Favorite Quote:
He's the one I call in the middle of the night. He's the one who makes everything alright. He loves me with no regret...I just haven't found him yet.

I read it and I really liked it so far!! I love how much Jacob cares for Michela and I love how you completely shock us by coming right out and telling us she has cancer! GREAT JOB! :)

on Oct. 18 2009 at 9:19 am
TeamJacobArchuleta ELITE, Chicago, Illinois
183 articles 7 photos 484 comments

Favorite Quote:
He's the one I call in the middle of the night. He's the one who makes everything alright. He loves me with no regret...I just haven't found him yet.

Thanks so much!!!! And of course I'll read your story, I'm sure it's great!!!! :)

on Oct. 17 2009 at 11:04 pm
TeamEdwardBarrett BRONZE, Columbia, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
Stay strong now cause things will get better, It may be stormy now but it cant rain forever.

create a freewebs account and copy them there so people can see them faster. Thats what I did with mine. www.courtneyxxwritings.webs.com

on Oct. 17 2009 at 11:02 pm
TeamEdwardBarrett BRONZE, Columbia, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
Stay strong now cause things will get better, It may be stormy now but it cant rain forever.

I absolutely loved the story! I stayed up so late reading them over and over trying to compare them to my love life and they are (kind of) SO similair. Ur writings just have a way of sucking people into them and wanting to read them over and over.

on Oct. 16 2009 at 3:19 pm
TeamJacobArchuleta ELITE, Chicago, Illinois
183 articles 7 photos 484 comments

Favorite Quote:
He's the one I call in the middle of the night. He's the one who makes everything alright. He loves me with no regret...I just haven't found him yet.

YOU GUYS ARE OFFICIALLY THE GREATEST FANS EVER!!!!! THIS CHAPTER IS NOW NUMBER 1 IN THE ROMANCE SECTION THANKS TO YOU GUYS!!!! THAT'S SOOOOOO AWESOME, YOU'RE THE BEST!!!!! I AM SO GRATEFUL TO HAVE FANS LIKE YOU!!!! THANKS SOOOOOOO MUCH!!!! :) :) :)

Emily(: BRONZE said...
on Oct. 16 2009 at 11:07 am
Emily(: BRONZE, Montclair, Virginia
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love is giving someone the power to destroy you...but trusting them not to

wow, i wanna know what happened--> what happened with ash and thatother girl!!!??