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January 18, 2010
By fzakeri1205 SILVER, Toledo, Ohio
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\"It takes courage to grow up and become who you really are.\" - e.e. cummings

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supple your l i p s
which trace myown
soft and delicate
passionate
i crave your scent

enticingly delicious

which loiters long
after you’re gone
your sweet taste

a hint of mint
coolwarm
moist
delectable
the hunger
drives me for more

as skin tingles
oooh the thrill
my body responds
my lips reply
readily, so eagerly
tenderly tracing my cheek
blushing bashful
my breath, quickened
as you tuck a loose curl
behind my ear
your finger lingering
to tease me dear

© Samantha A., Southbury, CT

The author's comments:
Written for an extra credit assignment in AP language and composition, about a first kiss and the wonderful experience of intimate moments with that special someone. (for my boyfriend of six months)
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HaHmAh12 GOLD said...
on Apr. 11 2010 at 9:36 pm
HaHmAh12 GOLD, Toledo, Ohio
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&quot;At the age of six I wanted to be a cook. At seven I wanted to be Napoleon. And my ambition has been growing steadily ever since.&quot; ~Salvador Dali

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oh god....oh god REALLY? haha i just found this comment. also, we need to work on posting some new stuff on here!!! just because we have no time and no lives does not mean we can just slack on our teen ink profiles. hell no!!
fzakeri1205 SILVER said...
on Mar. 18 2010 at 6:09 pm
fzakeri1205 SILVER, Toledo, Ohio
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\&quot;It takes courage to grow up and become who you really are.\&quot; - e.e. cummings

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lol i love you hahmah. gracias. and well..... at least you missed him touching himself and talking about his pleasure spots *CRINGE*
HaHmAh12 GOLD said...
on Feb. 4 2010 at 10:38 pm
HaHmAh12 GOLD, Toledo, Ohio
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this makes me so happy, fallon.

it's kind of great...and HOT. you have no idea..

and i'm proud of you for turning it in.

i err...didn't want darrin to make even more assumptions about me haha