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Who Am I?

June 30, 2010
By crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.


The words are there written,
In font one size small,
And yet my set brain does not,
Get them at all.

For how does one answer,
A question so broad,
When to have ingrained morals,
Is to have ingrained flaws.



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on Aug. 4 2010 at 10:00 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

Thanks!!!!!!!

on Aug. 4 2010 at 9:58 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

Thankyou so mcuh!!!

on Aug. 4 2010 at 9:23 pm
KathrynPaige GOLD, McCordsville, Indiana
16 articles 0 photos 8 comments

Favorite Quote:
I have lived eighty years of life and know nothing for it, but to be resigned and tell myself that flies are born to be devoured by spiders and man by his sorrows--Voltaire

I love how you put so much into so little. The words are perfectly placed and your heart flows into each one.

Custard said...
on Aug. 4 2010 at 9:23 pm
Custard,
0 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
Hate is a strong word. That is why I use it.

Why Fred? Why?

As clear as pea-soup!

The structure fits the poem and wording wonderfuly, and the underlying meaning is beautiful.  Keep writing!

Goodbar BRONZE said...
on Aug. 4 2010 at 9:18 pm
Goodbar BRONZE, Yukon, Oklahoma
2 articles 0 photos 2 comments
This is an amazing poem. Absolutely love it. five stars for sure.

on Aug. 2 2010 at 11:38 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

Thankyou!!

Shweta SILVER said...
on Aug. 2 2010 at 11:23 pm
Shweta SILVER, Saharsa, Other
5 articles 0 photos 40 comments
Very beautiful...I'm giving you five stars for this :)

on Aug. 2 2010 at 7:33 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

Thankyou!!!

Nirvana SILVER said...
on Aug. 2 2010 at 11:45 am
Nirvana SILVER, Moreno Valley, California
9 articles 0 photos 24 comments

Favorite Quote:
Until you accept who you are; you will never be happy with what you have

really good. 5 stars!

on Jul. 31 2010 at 10:30 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

Thanks!!!!!!!!!!

on Jul. 31 2010 at 10:29 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

Thanx so much!!!

on Jul. 31 2010 at 10:29 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

Thankyou!!!

Chloe_ BRONZE said...
on Jul. 31 2010 at 6:43 pm
Chloe_ BRONZE, San Antonio, Texas
4 articles 0 photos 43 comments

Favorite Quote:
Never underestimate the power of doing the ordinary in quite extraordinary ways.

TOtally get it! amazing!

on Jul. 31 2010 at 4:12 pm
LoverOfSong PLATINUM, New Lenox, Illinois
45 articles 7 photos 18 comments

Favorite Quote:
"When words fail, music speaks." Hans Christian Anderson

LOVE IT! and u said i was good! UR AWESOME

on Jul. 31 2010 at 11:24 am
nintendork11 BRONZE, Shaker Heights, Ohio
1 article 2 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
"So remember. NEVER surrender, because the unrelenting constancy of love and hope can rescue and restore you from any scope"

wowww. that is incredible...for such a short poem, the meaning and truth is huge :D <3

on Jul. 29 2010 at 6:06 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

Thankyou!!!

on Jul. 29 2010 at 6:05 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

Thanks i will!!!

on Jul. 29 2010 at 11:42 am
MercedesXO DIAMOND, South Easton, Massachusetts
52 articles 0 photos 280 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I realize that life is risks. It's acknowledging the past but looking forward. It's taking chances that we will make mistakes but believeing we all deserve to be forgiven."
-The Dead Tossed Waves.

Umm, i love this. Excellent job and i love the simplicity and meaning of it!

on Jul. 29 2010 at 10:32 am
PaolaC. PLATINUM, Palm Beach Gardens, Florida
21 articles 3 photos 41 comments

This is so true! <3

Please check out some of my work, if you get a chance. :)


on Jul. 28 2010 at 7:00 pm
crubs33 DIAMOND, Lido Beach, New York
58 articles 3 photos 750 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The most courageous act is still to think for yourself. Aloud."- Coco Chanel
Life isn't about surviving the storm, it's about learning to dance in the rain.

Thanks so much!!!