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Forever

September 6, 2010
By Joob-Stache GOLD, Rice Lake, Wisconsin
Joob-Stache GOLD, Rice Lake, Wisconsin
16 articles 0 photos 96 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't be afraid to take a chance, to take a fall, in the end it could be worth it all<3


Forever is forever.
aaaaayou can't change that.
You can't change what is forever.
And what is not.
Forever is in many shapes and forms.
Forever is a hope.
Forever is a dream.
Forever is you.
And forever is me.
Forever is my love.
Burning bright.
Just for you.
Forever is my passion.
The passion I have once had.
The passion that glows.
In the dark shaddows of night.
Forever.
But I must admit,
This is only a dream.
Forever is forever.
But nothin is really
Forever.


The author's comments:
Forever??? Is forever really forever???

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on Jan. 25 2011 at 10:07 am
Joob-Stache GOLD, Rice Lake, Wisconsin
16 articles 0 photos 96 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't be afraid to take a chance, to take a fall, in the end it could be worth it all<3

Thank-you.

on Jan. 6 2011 at 7:47 pm
SpringRayyn PLATINUM, Lakeville, Minnesota
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"Don't punish yourself," she heard her say again, but there would be punishment and pain, and there would be happiness too. That was writing."
--Markus Zusak, "The Book Thief"

I understood the 'and' part that you messed up...this is good! I like the ending; how it contradicts really everything else you say. I thought you were going to end it with "and nothing in between" but you didn't, which means it wasn't predictable and I like that!

on Jan. 4 2011 at 11:04 am
Joob-Stache GOLD, Rice Lake, Wisconsin
16 articles 0 photos 96 comments

Favorite Quote:
Don't be afraid to take a chance, to take a fall, in the end it could be worth it all<3

The second line got messed up. It's supposed to be: And you can't change that.