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Rainy Days

November 26, 2011
By KarinaDavidyuk GOLD, Brooklyn, New York
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KarinaDavidyuk GOLD, Brooklyn, New York
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Life is like a game of chess.. Every move makes a change.

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Rainy days
A raindrop glides down the window
Resembling my tears
The fog hides everything evil within
Nothing can be seen

The street lights struggle to light the path
And the fog resists giving up
I sit and watch them battle
Who will win?

I picture myself,
The path and the struggle
Which way leads to my future?
Should I find it?
Or should I be found?

© Lauren O'D., Weymouth, MA

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KarinaDavidyuk GOLD said...
on Jan. 7 2012 at 7:54 pm
KarinaDavidyuk GOLD, Brooklyn, New York
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Favorite Quote:
Life is like a game of chess.. Every move makes a change.

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Thank you for your thoughts :)
Zinaidia SILVER said...
on Jan. 7 2012 at 5:24 pm
Zinaidia SILVER, Moreno Valley, California
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\\\&quot;Whatever you are, be a good one.\\\&quot;

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Wow, very interesting. I loved the imagery! Great job, keep on writing.
pitt98 GOLD said...
on Dec. 4 2011 at 3:21 pm
pitt98 GOLD, Pittsburgh, Pennsylvania
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&quot;It&#039;s not the days in life we remember, rather the moments.&quot; 
- Walt Disney

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try getting rid of the cliches
KarinaDavidyuk GOLD said...
on Dec. 4 2011 at 1:15 pm
KarinaDavidyuk GOLD, Brooklyn, New York
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Thank you :) 
CreatingMadness BRONZE said...
on Nov. 29 2011 at 6:55 pm
CreatingMadness BRONZE, Lake Tapps, Washington
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this is a really good poem i can relate pretty easy and i think is just all around good lol
KarinaDavidyuk GOLD said...
on Nov. 29 2011 at 6:48 pm
KarinaDavidyuk GOLD, Brooklyn, New York
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Life is like a game of chess.. Every move makes a change.

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Thankk yoou soo much 
CarrieAnn13 GOLD said...
on Nov. 29 2011 at 6:43 pm
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Wow!  This is by far your best poem yet.  Excellent punctuation and rhythm and the ending line is spectacular.  "Or should it be found?"  That sent shivers down my spine!  In a good way, of course. :)