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Gleaming Blue

December 1, 2011
By LoganMarie14 GOLD, Lynchburg, Virginia
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LoganMarie14 GOLD, Lynchburg, Virginia
15 articles 15 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
“So it's not gonna be easy. It's going to be really hard; we're gonna have to work at this everyday, but I want to do that because I want you. I want all of you, forever, everyday. You and me... everyday." -The Notebook

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When I speak my words seem mute sometimes.

It's as if Im talking to someone non-existing, yet yearning them to be real.

But when someone calls my name, for some reason I can't look any of them in the eyes.

Afraid I'll get sucked in, lost within a world I don't want to be included in.

Then there was you, the one person I never wanted to lose sight of, a blue light that keeps me dreaming in my head, keeping me alive.

© Brandon W., Redwood City, CA

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LoganMarie14 GOLD said...
on Jan. 1 2012 at 12:37 am
LoganMarie14 GOLD, Lynchburg, Virginia
15 articles 15 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;So it&#039;s not gonna be easy. It&#039;s going to be really hard; we&#039;re gonna have to work at this everyday, but I want to do that because I want you. I want all of you, forever, everyday. You and me... everyday.&quot; -The Notebook

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Lol I will.. and thankk ya(:
ashlyn939 PLATINUM said...
on Dec. 11 2011 at 8:15 pm
ashlyn939 PLATINUM, Lynchburg, Virginia
34 articles 14 photos 75 comments

Favorite Quote:
&quot;Love means holding on to someone just as hard as you can because if you don&#039;t, one blink and they might disappear... forever.&quot; -Ellen Hopkins, Impulse

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this is really great i love your writing! keep it up!!! 
LoganMarie14 GOLD said...
on Dec. 8 2011 at 6:17 am
LoganMarie14 GOLD, Lynchburg, Virginia
15 articles 15 photos 28 comments

Favorite Quote:
&ldquo;So it&#039;s not gonna be easy. It&#039;s going to be really hard; we&#039;re gonna have to work at this everyday, but I want to do that because I want you. I want all of you, forever, everyday. You and me... everyday.&quot; -The Notebook

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thank you(:
Luna3952 SILVER said...
on Dec. 7 2011 at 4:10 pm
Luna3952 SILVER, Lynchburg, Virginia
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All is fair in love and war.<br /> Palsm 114<br /> John 3:17

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Mimi, thia is so beautifully written! i love how deep it is!