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I Look At Her

February 23, 2012
By Junior_Girl_10 BRONZE, Springboro, Ohio
Junior_Girl_10 BRONZE, Springboro, Ohio
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Favorite Quote:
"In three words I can sum up everything I've learned about life: it goes on." - Robert Frost


I cast my gaze upon the panel above,
A prodigious, unique, mural prevails before my eyes.
I stay placid,
Impelled to fathom the admirable masterpiece.

It's undulating and mashed,
No one seems to take it all in,
No one appears to descry it,
No one suggests that the canvas has authentic allure.

I envisage a trifle more than the general populations however.
Immediately upon my first glance,
I see a girl,
There is something more to her.

She is broken down,
Torn apart.
She is tortured, deeply, from the inside.
No one, tends to recognize that.

One day, her charm will be distinguished.
People will go deeper,
Passed her creased and shattered exterior.
One day.

One day,
this piece of artwork will receive what it truly deserves,
Acknowledgment for her courage and beauty.


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Joshua. GOLD said...
on Mar. 13 2012 at 9:42 pm
Joshua. GOLD, Las Vegas, Nevada
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Favorite Quote:
"So we shall let the reader answer this question for himself: Who is the happier man, he who has braved the storm of life and lived, or he who has stayed securely on shore and merely existed?" - Hunter S Tompson

I really like it! Keep writing!