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February 2, 2013
By BelieveInLoveAtFirstSight PLATINUM, Manchester, Connecticut
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BelieveInLoveAtFirstSight PLATINUM, Manchester, Connecticut
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The way I see it, every life is a pile of good things and bad things. The good things don't always soften the bad things, but vice versa, the bad things don't necessarily spoil the good things or make them unimportant. -The Doctor

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Thoughts.
Attacking your mind like wild bears.
Crazy and unstoppable.
Thoughts.
They are uncontrolled.
Very disturbing.
Watching your every movement.
Commenting on every step you take
Inescapable
Uncomfortable
Bad thoughts is what kills
"it" should be locked up
Never to escape.
Makes you die inside.
Thoughts are insane.
Overwhelming
Distracting
Thoughts take place of music
There is no "off" button
I can't shut them out
The replay button is stuck
It's out of control
Thoughts aren't sentences
No, they are questions
Why didn't you do this differently
Thoughts.

© Brad B., Colorado Springs, CO

The author's comments:
Lately I have been through a lot. I have also been grounded so having a lack of listening to music to tone out these helpless thoughts kills. I can't stop them, so I decided to attempt to write them away.
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Wings10FeetTall GOLD said...
on Sep. 23 2013 at 8:27 pm
Wings10FeetTall GOLD, Myrtle Beach, South Carolina
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May your words be sharp.<br /> - Christopher Paolini<br /> <br /> <br /> Nobody&#039;s going to wait for you, so do it now.<br /> -Ingrid Michaelson<br /> <br /> <br /> Broken hearts heal, but never the same.<br /> - Jessica Romo<br /> <br /> Idiots rely on luck.<br /> -Sherlock Holmes

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Oh. I'm sorry. :(
BelieveInLoveAtFirstSight PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 23 2013 at 4:36 pm
BelieveInLoveAtFirstSight PLATINUM, Manchester, Connecticut
21 articles 0 photos 61 comments

Favorite Quote:
The way I see it, every life is a pile of good things and bad things. The good things don&#039;t always soften the bad things, but vice versa, the bad things don&#039;t necessarily spoil the good things or make them unimportant. -The Doctor

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It still didn't end too well.. But I have experienced it.
Wings10FeetTall GOLD said...
on Sep. 22 2013 at 6:03 pm
Wings10FeetTall GOLD, Myrtle Beach, South Carolina
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May your words be sharp.<br /> - Christopher Paolini<br /> <br /> <br /> Nobody&#039;s going to wait for you, so do it now.<br /> -Ingrid Michaelson<br /> <br /> <br /> Broken hearts heal, but never the same.<br /> - Jessica Romo<br /> <br /> Idiots rely on luck.<br /> -Sherlock Holmes

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Good for you!
BelieveInLoveAtFirstSight PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 22 2013 at 10:57 am
BelieveInLoveAtFirstSight PLATINUM, Manchester, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
The way I see it, every life is a pile of good things and bad things. The good things don&#039;t always soften the bad things, but vice versa, the bad things don&#039;t necessarily spoil the good things or make them unimportant. -The Doctor

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I have had it happen to me. I have been in love at first sight, even though it was a one way street..
Wings10FeetTall GOLD said...
on Sep. 21 2013 at 10:18 am
Wings10FeetTall GOLD, Myrtle Beach, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
May your words be sharp.<br /> - Christopher Paolini<br /> <br /> <br /> Nobody&#039;s going to wait for you, so do it now.<br /> -Ingrid Michaelson<br /> <br /> <br /> Broken hearts heal, but never the same.<br /> - Jessica Romo<br /> <br /> Idiots rely on luck.<br /> -Sherlock Holmes

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No problem. So, what's the story behind your name?
BelieveInLoveAtFirstSight PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 20 2013 at 6:53 pm
BelieveInLoveAtFirstSight PLATINUM, Manchester, Connecticut
21 articles 0 photos 61 comments

Favorite Quote:
The way I see it, every life is a pile of good things and bad things. The good things don&#039;t always soften the bad things, but vice versa, the bad things don&#039;t necessarily spoil the good things or make them unimportant. -The Doctor

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Ha, thanks. (:
Wings10FeetTall GOLD said...
on Sep. 20 2013 at 9:29 am
Wings10FeetTall GOLD, Myrtle Beach, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
May your words be sharp.<br /> - Christopher Paolini<br /> <br /> <br /> Nobody&#039;s going to wait for you, so do it now.<br /> -Ingrid Michaelson<br /> <br /> <br /> Broken hearts heal, but never the same.<br /> - Jessica Romo<br /> <br /> Idiots rely on luck.<br /> -Sherlock Holmes

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No problem. Somebody who can actually pull off a pun...I never thought that I would find one. :P
BelieveInLoveAtFirstSight PLATINUM said...
on Sep. 19 2013 at 9:02 pm
BelieveInLoveAtFirstSight PLATINUM, Manchester, Connecticut
21 articles 0 photos 61 comments

Favorite Quote:
The way I see it, every life is a pile of good things and bad things. The good things don&#039;t always soften the bad things, but vice versa, the bad things don&#039;t necessarily spoil the good things or make them unimportant. -The Doctor

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Pun intended. Sorry I am just being notified about your comment.
Wings10FeetTall GOLD said...
on Aug. 30 2013 at 9:16 am
Wings10FeetTall GOLD, Myrtle Beach, South Carolina
17 articles 0 photos 332 comments

Favorite Quote:
May your words be sharp.<br /> - Christopher Paolini<br /> <br /> <br /> Nobody&#039;s going to wait for you, so do it now.<br /> -Ingrid Michaelson<br /> <br /> <br /> Broken hearts heal, but never the same.<br /> - Jessica Romo<br /> <br /> Idiots rely on luck.<br /> -Sherlock Holmes

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Yeah. So...thought pun intended or not?
BelieveInLoveAtFirstSight PLATINUM said...
on Aug. 30 2013 at 6:29 am
BelieveInLoveAtFirstSight PLATINUM, Manchester, Connecticut
21 articles 0 photos 61 comments

Favorite Quote:
The way I see it, every life is a pile of good things and bad things. The good things don&#039;t always soften the bad things, but vice versa, the bad things don&#039;t necessarily spoil the good things or make them unimportant. -The Doctor

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Haha, nahh. But at the time I was going through a lot so I thought (<< Haha, 'thought') that I would just write about thoughts in general and what they do to people instead of what was going on, ya know?
Wings10FeetTall GOLD said...
on Aug. 29 2013 at 3:57 pm
Wings10FeetTall GOLD, Myrtle Beach, South Carolina
17 articles 0 photos 332 comments

Favorite Quote:
May your words be sharp.<br /> - Christopher Paolini<br /> <br /> <br /> Nobody&#039;s going to wait for you, so do it now.<br /> -Ingrid Michaelson<br /> <br /> <br /> Broken hearts heal, but never the same.<br /> - Jessica Romo<br /> <br /> Idiots rely on luck.<br /> -Sherlock Holmes

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Oh, WOW! This is amazing! I know exactly what you mean about thoughts constantly driving you crazy. Did you read my mind then write this or something?