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Underneath It All

October 31, 2013
By Raveneyes BRONZE, Franklin Tx., Texas
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Raveneyes BRONZE, Franklin Tx., Texas
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Love me, Hate me, but just don't play me.

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Underneath the booze and pills,
Underneath the looks that could kill.
Underneath the scars and broken hearts,
Behind the locked doors where she falls apart.
Underneath the black make-up and clothes,
Underneath the black nails and soul.
Underneath this scar covered skin,
Is a bruised heart that’s broken, stitched, and sunken in.
Hiding from its fear of love,
Hiding from the world above.
Wondering if there’s someone there,
And hoping that the love her more than the clothes she wears.
Going crazy from the fights,
Begging God to make it right,
And praying she lives to see daylight.
I am that girl
Hoping she won’t fall.
I am that girl underneath it all.

© Jenna H., Marblehead, MA

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I went through a terrible time in my life were I lost my best friend and a family member in the same week.
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Raveneyes BRONZE said...
on Nov. 8 2013 at 2:02 pm
Raveneyes BRONZE, Franklin Tx., Texas
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Thank you for the comment it was nice and i appreceat it. I will certainly keep writing.
Raveneyes BRONZE said...
on Nov. 8 2013 at 2:01 pm
Raveneyes BRONZE, Franklin Tx., Texas
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Love me, Hate me, but just don&#039;t play me.

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Hearing that really means a lot to me. I appreceate the praise.
Raveneyes BRONZE said...
on Nov. 8 2013 at 2:00 pm
Raveneyes BRONZE, Franklin Tx., Texas
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Thanks for the comment it really means a lot. I've been writing poetry, music, and stories since i was 9 and it feels great to know that someone thanks that they are great.
micshea99 PLATINUM said...
on Nov. 6 2013 at 8:23 pm
micshea99 PLATINUM, Matthews, North Carolina
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This is gorgeous.
KaylaaLovee GOLD said...
on Nov. 6 2013 at 10:40 am
KaylaaLovee GOLD, Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
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Great Poem. Stay Strong :)
mynameisnothabib GOLD said...
on Nov. 6 2013 at 9:57 am
mynameisnothabib GOLD, Quinlan, Texas
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I can relate to this, and i love how you show yourself in poems, and you aren't afraid to share.  love your wording and the ways you describe certain things. Keep it up(: