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Brick Walls

February 28, 2016
By Shahiro PLATINUM, Johnston, Iowa
Shahiro PLATINUM, Johnston, Iowa
20 articles 2 photos 262 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Soon we must all choose between what is right and what is easy." - Dumbledore (Goblet of Fire)


See you in the hall,

My heart takes off; this brick wall

Is interesting.



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on Apr. 13 2016 at 9:54 pm
Shahiro PLATINUM, Johnston, Iowa
20 articles 2 photos 262 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Soon we must all choose between what is right and what is easy." - Dumbledore (Goblet of Fire)

Thank you! will you check out some of my other work as well?

on Mar. 7 2016 at 10:15 pm
ambivalent SILVER, West Bend, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
everything in life is writable about if you have the outgoing guts to do it, and the imagination to improvise. the worst enemy to creativity is self-doubt. [sylvia plath]

never have i related so much to so few words. concise & lovely

on Mar. 3 2016 at 2:45 pm
Shahiro PLATINUM, Johnston, Iowa
20 articles 2 photos 262 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Soon we must all choose between what is right and what is easy." - Dumbledore (Goblet of Fire)

Thanks! I'm trying writing haikus for pretty much the first time. Glad you could relate with this one!!

on Mar. 2 2016 at 10:41 pm
HumbleBee SILVER, Defiance, Ohio
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This is a very nice haiku. In only seventeen syllables, you have captured such a common and familiar feeling. I love that you said "this brick wall is interesting" because it radiates imagery and puts me in my own high school hallway avoiding eye contact with my crush. Good job!