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Opulence MAG

May 1, 2008
By AquaGem SILVER, Kalamazoo, Michigan
AquaGem SILVER, Kalamazoo, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
Nobody will ever win the Battle of the Sexes. There's just too much fraternizing with the enemy. ~Henry Kissinger

Life it too short to let you matter.


I’ve been watching him for days now. When he leaves his house to go to school, I’m the one carefully tailing him, switching cars every day to make myself look less suspicious. If he ever sneaks out of his second-story room, I’ll be the one silently watching from a nearby tree. In class when he turns, feeling eyes on the back of his head, I’m the one who sent the hair on the back of his neck up on end. I am the girl whose shadow is always slightly overlapping his.

Being assigned to watch him almost makes me
feel like I’m not a stalker. Though I’m only 17, I’m a full-fledged member of the organization known as O.P.U.L.E.N.C.E. I’ve been with them since the ­tender age of five. It’s my home. Being an orphan, my office is also my permanent residence, the couch a fold-out bed. There are many others like me: no family. A lot of us are loners and haven’t chosen this route for ourselves.

I’m a tracker. I have been for years and some might say that I am the best at not being the best. In other words, I’m great at being invisible. Or at not being noticed. It’s not as hard as the others in the organization think. Being young and female is good, since most we track are young. Seeing me around younger people – my age, actually – doesn’t raise alarm bells. It helps that I’m cute. With a small frame, light hazel eyes, and short blond hair that curls under my chin, I don’t appear threatening. Of course, my ­organization-funded training doesn’t back that theory.

Soon I won’t be tracking down others with the power. They are finally going to give me an apprentice. After years of mastering everything I’ve been taught, they see my potential. That’s not to say I know everything. Even with my extended life I won’t be able to learn all the things I want to. If only this annoying boy would show the signs. It’s been almost a week. If he doesn’t show soon, they’ll reassign me. That much longer until I get my apprentice.

So here I am, sipping a latté and waiting for the Target to leave for school. I have been put in all of his classes in case something happens there, though I graduated high school years ago. Private tutors sped things up. With no family or personal ties, I had lots of time to devote to my studies. Martial arts black belts. Twelve languages, not including English. Everything a girl needs for a serious career in the agency. Such positions of power are not handed out easily. You must prove yourself many times over.

The Target and I have never spoken, but I know a lot about him. His file told me some, but after watching him for only a few days, I feel confident in saying that I know things no one else does. Not just the obvious, either. He resents his father and is protective of his mother, which makes me suspect the father is less than faithful. He smiles often but doesn’t make a lot of eye contact. He usually only speaks when spoken to. Although he has many friends, he isn’t close with any of them. The Target is observant, a watcher. This leads me to believe we would get along if he shows any promise.

I look down at my watch, then back at his house a few blocks away. The Target is late, which means I’ll be late too. Today my ride is a shiny black sports car, not out of place in this suburb full of midlife-crisis men. I turn on the engine impatiently. I’m fiddling with the radio when I hear something. I don’t feel any immediate danger, and I know to trust those feelings. But I ­also know that something is off.

Just as I am about to get out of the car and pretend to look in the trunk, the passenger door opens. I look up in surprise as the Target slides into the seat next to me. I grin, quite pleased by this turn of events. This is definitely a good sign. Perhaps intuition is strong in him. That would be good for my apprentice to have, complementary. I could handle having to deal with that.

“Hello, Lenna. Why have you been following me for a week now?” the Target asks lightly, conversationally, his first words ever said in my direction.

Ah, one of my many aliases. The organization set it up so that whenever I’m on a case, I get a new name, past, and present. It’s very powerful. The organization can basically do anything it needs; it has people everywhere imaginable. I’m just one of many, though there aren’t that many at the top, as I am. They don’t trust many to be trackers. Or to be apprentices. All of the full members have the power, though we control others to get things done.

My smile deepens as I say in my authoritative, professional voice, “My real name is Jade. I am a witch of the moon and a tracker for the organization known as O.P.U.L.E.N.C.E. You are also a witch. We would like to formally welcome you into the organization as my apprentice. Here is my card for verification.”

Jade Wordsworth
Tracker for O.P.U.L.E.N.C.E
Official Political Understanding Lending ­Everyone ­Navigation for Co-Existing Ethereals
Office hours: 8 a.m.-3 p.m. Mon-Sat
Phone: 555-5555
Proud league of witches of the sun and moon.
Worldwide.

“What do you mean ‘moon and sun’? Or ‘tracker’?” he asks, still looking at my card like it’s going to ­disappear.

“Types of magic. Moon is all about spells, the sun is more potion-based, though each type of witchcraft involves the other somehow. As a tracker, I find people like you and I bring them to O.P.U.L.E.N.C.E. Every witch must register, train, and become a member by law. In fact, the organization is like a government targeted toward witches,” I explain with a smile, loving the fact that this time I get to teach the newbie.

“Magic? Seriously?” he asks, eyes wide, meeting mine. They are large, yellow, and catlike.

I click a button on my left, automatically locking the doors. I put the car into drive, pulling out onto the road. As an afterthought I add as a courtesy, “I think you had better come with me.” .



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on Oct. 30 2009 at 6:01 am
yessssss! i read ur story a while again, (before it was published) and i commented on it and then i lost ur storeee 4 a while cause the 'advanced search' thing on teen ink wasn't working but know i found ur storee again yayyyyyyy mmeeeeeee!!!

RLJoy DIAMOND said...
on Oct. 18 2009 at 8:03 pm
RLJoy DIAMOND, Glen Rock, New Jersey
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this is amazing! Ur such a talented writer and congrats on being published! I loved it!!

on Oct. 8 2009 at 9:15 pm
costarican93 GOLD, Washington, Louisiana
14 articles 0 photos 33 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The city looks so pretty do you want to burn it with me?"- Hollywood Undead

It sounds like a different set of books that i read called Night World they are pretty amazing. but i loved your story. do you plan on making it a book?

AnneOnnimous said...
on Oct. 8 2009 at 6:15 pm
i really like this story, it was really interesting. I just felt sort of disappointed when she said she was a witch. Not that I don't like fantasy, i just got the feeling that maybe this would turn out to be one of those far-out fantasy stories that are are all the same. But it wasn't like that so good job.

on Oct. 8 2009 at 5:24 pm
FlyleafFreak DIAMOND, Loveland, Colorado
51 articles 0 photos 203 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I have faith in fools;self confidence my friends call it"~Edger Allan Poe
"In this world of infinite insanity, your friends are the best psychiatrists you will ever have."~Me

Wow! I cannot wait until you continue! If this was a book, I'd buy it!

S. said...
on Oct. 7 2009 at 9:57 pm
cool ending; who hasn't wanted to say that? lol awesome keep it up

on Oct. 7 2009 at 6:14 pm
chartothalatte GOLD, Cleveland Heights, Ohio
10 articles 1 photo 62 comments
wow! this is amazing! i would like to read how this story continues; its very interesting. please publish more! 5 stars and a fave for you!

on Oct. 7 2009 at 6:09 pm
ComebackCadillac SILVER, Fredericksburg, Virginia
5 articles 2 photos 5 comments
Very interesting!

on Oct. 7 2009 at 5:11 pm
writerscramp PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
33 articles 0 photos 130 comments

Favorite Quote:
Anyone who says winning isn't everything,
Has won nothing.
``Mia Hamm

Please write more to this story! Your Really OnTo SomeThing Here. (i'm hyper and i like capital letters :))))

on Oct. 7 2009 at 5:10 pm
writerscramp PLATINUM, Green Bay, Wisconsin
33 articles 0 photos 130 comments

Favorite Quote:
Anyone who says winning isn't everything,
Has won nothing.
``Mia Hamm

I don't think its supposed to. This girl, shes been around a while, to say the least. I mean, look at her creds, 12 languages, excluding English? Yes, I should hope shes more poised than a teenage boy!

palumbie said...
on Oct. 7 2009 at 4:29 pm
This passage, “Opulence”, is a magnificent paper that I became curious when I started to read the first sentence. It took my breath away when you said “being assigned to watch him,” it made me interested to what might come along during this section of the paper. During the total story, I felt like I was there with her stalking the boy, you made me have a clear picture painted in my mind of me motionless standing right there next to you observing his every move. Also, I personally think that you should make a sequel out of the story so far. In conclusion, I would like to read more of your stories to come onward in the future!

on Oct. 7 2009 at 3:50 pm
AquariusSunandMoon SILVER, Sublette, Illinois
8 articles 17 photos 69 comments
This is brilliant!!! Is this just a short story or part of a book?

My only critique is that the 'boy's' dialogue doesn't seem to flow with the rest of the story.

on Oct. 7 2009 at 3:07 pm
ch.prince BRONZE, Rimrock, Arizona
3 articles 0 photos 12 comments
This is really good, I like the plot; it had me hooked with the first paragraph. I hope you keep up the work and post it, I'd love to get to keep reading it!!

on Oct. 7 2009 at 3:21 am
Kitten111 SILVER, Watanobbi, Other
6 articles 0 photos 48 comments

Favorite Quote:
Knowledge is knowing that tomato is a fruit ..... wisdom is not putting it in fruit salad :P

AWESOMENESS :) your amazing keep up the good work

Fredwardness said...
on Sep. 16 2009 at 6:29 pm
it was okay...i feel like you could add more tho, but it was pretty good

on Sep. 16 2009 at 3:29 pm
wordweaver96 PLATINUM, Winchester, Kentucky
37 articles 2 photos 254 comments

Favorite Quote:
" It is not our abilities but our choices that show who we truly are. "
Albus Dumbledore


See, we really DON'T have anything to fear but fear itself!

i luv this

Angelkiss00 said...
on Sep. 16 2009 at 1:36 pm
That was amazing, i wish there was more

on Aug. 25 2009 at 3:06 pm
KinseyLlama BRONZE, Hoover, Alabama
2 articles 0 photos 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
To the world, you may just be one person, but to one person, you may just be the world.

Wow, I didn't even guess she was a witch! Me=Slow But seriously, now I want more!

meaghanw said...
on Aug. 23 2009 at 6:55 am
meaghanw, Dunham, Other
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Awesome! I wish I knew more!

foaly2001 said...
on Aug. 22 2009 at 6:14 am
This is really cool. It'd make a GREAT prologue. I want to read more about it!