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Opulence MAG

May 1, 2008
By AquaGem SILVER, Kalamazoo, Michigan
AquaGem SILVER, Kalamazoo, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
Nobody will ever win the Battle of the Sexes. There's just too much fraternizing with the enemy. ~Henry Kissinger

Life it too short to let you matter.


I’ve been watching him for days now. When he leaves his house to go to school, I’m the one carefully tailing him, switching cars every day to make myself look less suspicious. If he ever sneaks out of his second-story room, I’ll be the one silently watching from a nearby tree. In class when he turns, feeling eyes on the back of his head, I’m the one who sent the hair on the back of his neck up on end. I am the girl whose shadow is always slightly overlapping his.

Being assigned to watch him almost makes me
feel like I’m not a stalker. Though I’m only 17, I’m a full-fledged member of the organization known as O.P.U.L.E.N.C.E. I’ve been with them since the ­tender age of five. It’s my home. Being an orphan, my office is also my permanent residence, the couch a fold-out bed. There are many others like me: no family. A lot of us are loners and haven’t chosen this route for ourselves.

I’m a tracker. I have been for years and some might say that I am the best at not being the best. In other words, I’m great at being invisible. Or at not being noticed. It’s not as hard as the others in the organization think. Being young and female is good, since most we track are young. Seeing me around younger people – my age, actually – doesn’t raise alarm bells. It helps that I’m cute. With a small frame, light hazel eyes, and short blond hair that curls under my chin, I don’t appear threatening. Of course, my ­organization-funded training doesn’t back that theory.

Soon I won’t be tracking down others with the power. They are finally going to give me an apprentice. After years of mastering everything I’ve been taught, they see my potential. That’s not to say I know everything. Even with my extended life I won’t be able to learn all the things I want to. If only this annoying boy would show the signs. It’s been almost a week. If he doesn’t show soon, they’ll reassign me. That much longer until I get my apprentice.

So here I am, sipping a latté and waiting for the Target to leave for school. I have been put in all of his classes in case something happens there, though I graduated high school years ago. Private tutors sped things up. With no family or personal ties, I had lots of time to devote to my studies. Martial arts black belts. Twelve languages, not including English. Everything a girl needs for a serious career in the agency. Such positions of power are not handed out easily. You must prove yourself many times over.

The Target and I have never spoken, but I know a lot about him. His file told me some, but after watching him for only a few days, I feel confident in saying that I know things no one else does. Not just the obvious, either. He resents his father and is protective of his mother, which makes me suspect the father is less than faithful. He smiles often but doesn’t make a lot of eye contact. He usually only speaks when spoken to. Although he has many friends, he isn’t close with any of them. The Target is observant, a watcher. This leads me to believe we would get along if he shows any promise.

I look down at my watch, then back at his house a few blocks away. The Target is late, which means I’ll be late too. Today my ride is a shiny black sports car, not out of place in this suburb full of midlife-crisis men. I turn on the engine impatiently. I’m fiddling with the radio when I hear something. I don’t feel any immediate danger, and I know to trust those feelings. But I ­also know that something is off.

Just as I am about to get out of the car and pretend to look in the trunk, the passenger door opens. I look up in surprise as the Target slides into the seat next to me. I grin, quite pleased by this turn of events. This is definitely a good sign. Perhaps intuition is strong in him. That would be good for my apprentice to have, complementary. I could handle having to deal with that.

“Hello, Lenna. Why have you been following me for a week now?” the Target asks lightly, conversationally, his first words ever said in my direction.

Ah, one of my many aliases. The organization set it up so that whenever I’m on a case, I get a new name, past, and present. It’s very powerful. The organization can basically do anything it needs; it has people everywhere imaginable. I’m just one of many, though there aren’t that many at the top, as I am. They don’t trust many to be trackers. Or to be apprentices. All of the full members have the power, though we control others to get things done.

My smile deepens as I say in my authoritative, professional voice, “My real name is Jade. I am a witch of the moon and a tracker for the organization known as O.P.U.L.E.N.C.E. You are also a witch. We would like to formally welcome you into the organization as my apprentice. Here is my card for verification.”

Jade Wordsworth
Tracker for O.P.U.L.E.N.C.E
Official Political Understanding Lending ­Everyone ­Navigation for Co-Existing Ethereals
Office hours: 8 a.m.-3 p.m. Mon-Sat
Phone: 555-5555
Proud league of witches of the sun and moon.
Worldwide.

“What do you mean ‘moon and sun’? Or ‘tracker’?” he asks, still looking at my card like it’s going to ­disappear.

“Types of magic. Moon is all about spells, the sun is more potion-based, though each type of witchcraft involves the other somehow. As a tracker, I find people like you and I bring them to O.P.U.L.E.N.C.E. Every witch must register, train, and become a member by law. In fact, the organization is like a government targeted toward witches,” I explain with a smile, loving the fact that this time I get to teach the newbie.

“Magic? Seriously?” he asks, eyes wide, meeting mine. They are large, yellow, and catlike.

I click a button on my left, automatically locking the doors. I put the car into drive, pulling out onto the road. As an afterthought I add as a courtesy, “I think you had better come with me.” .



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on May. 22 2009 at 8:47 pm
FarmGirl, East Grand Rapids, Michigan
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Love it!!! the title was rather interesting; it caught my eye

on May. 16 2009 at 8:47 pm
bookhugger14 SILVER, Delta, Ohio
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this is a very interesting piece... a little too odd for my taste but the details were very well done. the title really captured my attention :)

on May. 6 2009 at 3:38 pm
DaydreamEscapist BRONZE, Cautious, North Carolina
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I love this. It is very imaginative and well written.

on May. 6 2009 at 3:28 pm
DaydreamEscapist BRONZE, Cautious, North Carolina
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I love this. It is wonderful.

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Captivating and imaginative. I love it.

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on May. 5 2009 at 3:11 am
Maryt, San Antonio, Texas
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that was very awesome love it cant wait to read more

on May. 3 2009 at 10:29 pm
sarakate SILVER, Mechanicsville, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
“I\'d rather be hated for who I am, than loved for who I am not.”
Kurt Cobain

omg i love it! I'm not really into magic and all that, but your writting had me on the edge of my seat (litteraly) and wanting more. This is awesome and you could totally develop a whole book out of it!

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on May. 3 2009 at 8:58 pm
JessC SILVER, Waterloo, Other
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Wow. This is amazing. You have true talent.

on May. 3 2009 at 3:31 pm
-xlimitless239x- GOLD, Vanceboro, North Carolina
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on May. 3 2009 at 1:02 am
daisydee123 SILVER, Gotham City, Illinois
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im new to this site so im not very experienced but your story was great please tell us there is more!!!! Seriously back by popular demand! very very very very very very very very good. it will stick in my mind forever!

on May. 2 2009 at 8:27 pm
daisydee123 SILVER, Gotham City, Illinois
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very good very professinal.

on Apr. 30 2009 at 10:27 pm
Fix_A_Heart BRONZE, Yuma, Arizona
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Favorite Quote:
"If I had a flower for every time I thought of you, I could walk in my garden forever."
"You can Bandage the damage, but you never really can fix a heart!"

this was agreat story i hope to read more

on Apr. 29 2009 at 1:54 am
thedaydreamer13 BRONZE, Delta, Ohio
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Very interesting. I think you made Jade very... mysterious. I hope to see and read more soon!! It is a good short story. :)

on Apr. 29 2009 at 1:53 am
Meleah17 SILVER, Bloomsburg, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"All the best people are, mad" -Alice in wonderland

Wow good job

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on Apr. 29 2009 at 12:23 am
mmfdg623 GOLD, Lyndhurst, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
Far away in the sunshine are my highest aspirations. I may not reach them, but I can look up and see their beauty, believe in them, and try to follow where they lead.
Louisa May Alcott

This story is really interesting. It sounds like the first chapter of a book. Good work, keep it up.

on Apr. 29 2009 at 12:05 am
bookhugger14 SILVER, Delta, Ohio
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on Apr. 28 2009 at 8:39 pm
i love this story it is great and i love that involves withchcraft and it is a realy good story i who ever wrote it pute great thought to it if it sas true then i would want to join at first you would think she is a stoker but as you get more into it she is like a secret ajent

on Apr. 26 2009 at 10:28 pm
KaylaKissesAlways BRONZE, Henderson, Nevada
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Wow this story is absolutely amazing! I hope that it isn't finished though! YOu have a great amount of detail, which is always good. This is the kind of page turner that every person, young and old, would want to read. I hope that it may be turned into maybe a book. It has a great title that draws you in. I love how the beggining puts you right into the action, and you don't feel like you've missed anything. Keep writing!