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You & Me

October 8, 2009
By bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
bluemagnet22 PLATINUM, Dearborn Hts, Michigan
24 articles 16 photos 644 comments

Favorite Quote:
You were born an origanal why die a copy?The secret to success is the consistency to pursue.To the world you may be one person,but to one person you may be the world.To receive the right answer,you must ask the right question.Don't worry be happy! :)

I saw you today,
But you're not as I remember.
Your eyes no longer sparkle,
You've changed since last September.

You were so full of life,
Yet now you are so cold.
Your personality has tarnished,
When you once had a heart of gold.

You fell out of my life,
Just like leaves in the fall.
We were so very close,
Now you're not here at all.

You saw me today,
I'm the same as you remember.
My eyes still sparkle,
I've not changed since last September.

The author's comments:
Isn't it so sad when you see an old friend and their whole personality and outlook on life has changed...and not for the good. Well that's what inspired me for this poem...I hope you enjoyed it

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seriously said...
on May. 4 2014 at 9:22 pm
Will someone please tell me what a sonnet is?

on Mar. 30 2014 at 9:09 pm
Laugh_Live_Write BRONZE, Mukilteo, Washington
4 articles 0 photos 21 comments

Favorite Quote:
"All our dreams can come true, if only we have the courage to pursue them." -Walt Disney

This is a great poem! Short, sweet, and relatable.

on Feb. 27 2014 at 8:20 pm
thedakota127 BRONZE, Davisburg, Michigan
2 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
"Sometimes its right to do the wrong thing." -Dr. Jeffery Squires

Try making it longer. It's good so far though :)

on Feb. 17 2014 at 10:26 am
micshea99 PLATINUM, Matthews, North Carolina
47 articles 0 photos 72 comments
Great poem! Try working on keeping around the same number of syllbales in each rhyming line to give it a more constant rythem!

on Jan. 25 2014 at 10:54 am
Ms.Grossi PLATINUM, Malden, Massachusetts
25 articles 2 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If I wasn't an actor, I would have been a secret agent." - Thornton Wilder

@xG4RY, I agree. It's a great poem, but I wouldn't call it a sonnet. 

on Jan. 12 2014 at 9:43 am
LittleMissFire BRONZE, Saint Catharine, Missouri
1 article 0 photos 1 comment
Your poems very relatable. I like it a lot  

Terry_A BRONZE said...
on Oct. 30 2013 at 12:28 pm
Terry_A BRONZE, Las Vegas, Nevada
4 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
"who you choose to be around you, let's you know who you are."

I feel like I can relate to this since I saw an old friend a few days ago. They were really different from what I remember them as. Overall, great poem!

Buurrry said...
on Oct. 30 2013 at 12:21 pm
Buurrry, Las Vegas, Nevada
0 articles 0 photos 13 comments

Favorite Quote:
Time is a slut. She screws everybody. - John Green, The Fault in our Stars

The poem is very relatable. You convey the disapointment of seeing someone change with out you very well. I enjoyed this poem.

Annneee BRONZE said...
on Oct. 18 2013 at 12:24 pm
Annneee BRONZE, Mandeville, Louisiana
4 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Life isn't about finding yourself. Life is about creating yourself."
George Bernard Shaw

I love this poem so much. I loved the theme of fall incorporated into this. Also, I can most definitely relate to how people change, and not for the better. Great poem overall.

Razzy said...
on Oct. 17 2013 at 8:41 pm
Razzy, Somewhere, California
0 articles 0 photos 6 comments

Favorite Quote:
"What great thing would you attempt if you knew you could not fail?" ~Robert H. Schuller

Really great poem! ^_^ I love it!

xG4RY GOLD said...
on Oct. 17 2013 at 7:01 pm
xG4RY GOLD, East Falmouth, Massachusetts
19 articles 0 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The shorter it is, the more well said it is."

Why did you call this a sonnet? What type is it? It is written in Iambic Pentameter, tretrameter, monometer, ect? Did you even pick A Iamb, trochee, dactyl or anapest to start from? The rhyme scheme doesn't even really match a form of any sonnet.

on Oct. 15 2013 at 4:49 pm
DreamWeaver BRONZE, Coarsegold, California
3 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
Writing is nothing more than a guided dream.
Jorge Luis Borges

I've been looking for a poem that described how I felt on this subject. Couldn't find a good one until this one! It's beautiful. 

Merla said...
on Sep. 11 2013 at 9:55 am
Merla, Reykjavík, Other
0 articles 0 photos 6 comments
I liked this poem. It was simple and beautiful. I liked the flow, the spaces, the feeling. Good work.  

on Jul. 31 2013 at 12:24 pm
catwithglasses SILVER, Sewickley, Pennsylvania
8 articles 0 photos 19 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I'm selfish, impatient, and a little insecure. I make mistakes, I am out of control and at times hard to handle. But if you can't handle me at my worst, then you don't deserve me at my best."
-Marilyn Monroe

I'm not able to relate to this, but your poem is very well written. I can picture it.

on Jul. 15 2013 at 2:31 pm
CatchAFallingStar PLATINUM, Pearland, Texas
24 articles 6 photos 67 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you love something, let it go. If it comes back to you, it's yours, if it doesn't, it never was." - Unknown

I can really relate to this poem. I've experienced this quite a few times :/ You did a great job with it :)

on Jun. 18 2013 at 3:40 pm
Cassie1435 GOLD, Skokie, Illinois
11 articles 0 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Doctor, our insanity is not that we see people that aren't there. It's that we ignore the ones who are."
Andrea Gibson


Akshay09121 said...
on Jun. 11 2013 at 12:46 pm
Akshay09121, Bathinda, Indiana
0 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
There Is Great Value Of Disaster.........
Bcoz...We Can Start It All Over Again

awesum...!! poem

on Jun. 8 2013 at 10:39 pm
Jessi_suarez1 GOLD, Kissimmee, Florida
16 articles 0 photos 98 comments
wow i honestly love this poem! it was simple and sweet. very good job.

anonymous said...
on May. 29 2013 at 4:23 am
Just thought I'd let you know...I read your sonnet a couple of weeks ago while looking for inspiration for my own sonnet I had to write for a class assignment. I thought it was truly amazing and inspired me to write my own sonnet that wasn't boring, completely comprised of shakespearean language and make me want to pull my hair out as I wrote it. A couple of days ago we presented to the class and this guy read out the sonnet he had written, I couldn't help but think I'd heard it before. After hours spent driving myself crazy searching for where I'd heard it I FINALLY came back to this page and realized he had read yours. Congratulations, your famous! Love from Australia. 

on Apr. 13 2013 at 8:21 pm
This poem is really incredible. Anyone can relate to this and you did an amazing job:)