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Dreaming Out Loud

May 25, 2010
By maybeshannon DIAMOND, Keller, Texas
maybeshannon DIAMOND, Keller, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"you just can't recreate stupid." --jacobbbb
"i just saw the picture of epicness... M&M guitar!!" --kevin brown
"our love is so dumbbb" --sean kingston
"if perfect's what you're searchin' for then just stay the same" --bruno mars <333 =]

Well we've graduated eighth grade
and school's been let out.
I'm lucky if I get to see you
just once a week now.
I can't help but wonder though
when will mother get too tough,
and decide that once a week
with you is too much?
So when the movies get too long
or the music gets too loud,
just take my hand in yours
and pull me away from the crowd.
Then press your lips against mine,
soft and slow and sweet,
wrap your arms around my waist
and sweep me off my feet.
Say you love me like it's true,
sweet and soft and slow,
then lean down and kiss me again,
hug me and pull me close.
I'm wishing, wanting, waiting for
the day when you just might
make that really happen
not just in my dreams at night…

The author's comments:
yeah im pretty pathetic arent i?... oh well cant help what the heart wants...

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on Aug. 17 2010 at 2:19 pm
Boosflash DIAMOND, Papillion, Nebraska
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Favorite Quote:
What the front door.

its not pathetic if no one's expecting you to be a stalker. i love this captain. i love the rhyming sheme and the fact that you were just dreaming.

on Jun. 23 2010 at 5:38 pm
CJbutterfly SILVER, Chattahoochee, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
\"Never let the fear of striking out keep you from playing the game\"

this is so good!!!

Check my stuff out if ya have time =)

on Jun. 18 2010 at 11:33 am
ShenelleCrystal SILVER, M, New York
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Favorite Quote:
Laugh your heart out dance in the rain cherish the memories ignore the pain love + learn forget and forgive because remember you only have [one life to live] ♥

omg ! this is amazing ! fantastic writer ! :) Dont ever stop

Please come and check out my poems [comment or rate] Thank u